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A Heavy Light Thought

Gravity is telling time line by line my future is told but I will rest assured death lightens the load. 12/28/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2021 3:39:00 PM

oh what a great message in this one!!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2021 5:22:00 PM

I spit out my milk through my nose so thanks for making me change my pajamas tonight Mo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/13/2021 6:49:00 AM

Always look on the bright side of death ;), xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/10/2021 6:59:00 PM

I love how you infuse so many layers of meaning into a few lines - this will keep me pondering a long time ~

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/11/2021 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Michelle! ~x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/5/2021 7:40:00 AM

A wonderful overlapping of lines. Truth ebb and flows

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/11/2021 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Kim! xomo

Niyna Desangre

Date: 1/1/2021 4:59:00 PM

A light-hearted reminder of the real deal! I feel the weight lifting as we speak. *Niyna*

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/3/2021 8:15:00 AM

Poifect! Thank you so much! New Year hugs ~xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/30/2020 11:08:00 AM

OUCH, this is so true for the dead; BUT sometimes a heavier load for the living. Well written as always Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2020 7:59:00 AM

Thank you my friend, xomo!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/29/2020 12:02:00 PM

Death just creates food for worms, ants, termites, rats, mice, and things we know nothing about, all of which makes them very happy indeed, so no one lives for naught! This pandemic is one long Thanksgiving banquet for them, so no need to rush in with dessert! Aloha! Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/31/2020 10:34:00 AM

Then you automatically qualify for the position of zookeeper for skunks as an entire family of skunks can not match one vulture nest! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2020 7:58:00 AM

I dunno, kinda love vultures...

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/30/2020 10:22:00 AM

You might rethink that thought after you visit a vulture nest! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/29/2020 8:24:00 PM

Let me carry on as carrion, feed me to the birds. ~x

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/29/2020 9:49:00 AM

I feel the weight of the burden in this poem Maureen. "There are people in the world so hungry, that God cannot appear to them except in the form of bread." -Mahatma Gandhi

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/29/2020 10:42:00 AM

“I’m not ready for that final disappointment” a la Peggy Lee, Is That All There Is ~xomo