A battered heart, full of wounds and tares heavy with tears.
My battered razor cut tormented heart So tender so heavy and full of tears My heart sunk into the consuming unforgiving fathoms Of the darkest deepest coldest sea The waves never washed the tears away The crimson blood bled and dispersed diluted Eventually vanishing into obscurity The pincushion remains of my tender heart Just festered and decayed Under layers and layers of silt Never missed unloved, out of sight And out of reach.
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