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A Heavy Burden

When the heart falls from a great height heavily burdened Heaven is blinded beyond karma's sake where only the victim remains truly denied vision Begging mercy holds love soulfully touching within a deafening silence burning fire aches inside hate Walking into the desert oasis of one soul putting on shoes of another's hurt exposed Sorrow enters with grief stricken sadness as this world turns upside down madness pain dark side unpleasant place God forsaken feelings dwell hopeless cast as meaningless without hope with excuses to match each strike the game played out perfect Lost in each living teardrop exposed precious holding crystal memories diamonds splashing clear soaked by beauty kissed Salted remains cherished helps expose true loyalties gift opens doors to ungrateful grit The hidden truth has a voice speaks within your guilt under toned there it hides behind a mask blinded playing someone for the fool

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Date: 8/8/2016 8:31:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very deep and very sad, heartfelt poem that you've written here my dearest friend Liam. It sure makes me very sad reading this and I can feel very deep in my heart n' soul your pain too.Very deeply sad poem indeed Liam,but very beautifully written.Yes, the world is completely upside down and the only thing we can do sometimes is to pray a lot more for all in this world.Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Just dazzling!A true glowing golden gem!Just awesome! Excellent!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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