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A Heavenly Vision

A heavenly vision came walking my way I tried to stay calm but my face gave me away My eyes nearly bulged right out of my head sweat dripped from my chin 'neath a gap-toothed grin My jaw dropped beside me as I lowered my head... Had she blown me a kiss ~ or vanished instead

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2022 1:12:00 PM

Love the ending!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM

And what's the beginning? -- Chopped liver? Ha, ha. Just kidding.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/10/2022 4:29:00 PM

Aah! shy Gershon. Cute peom, sounds like me in my teens forsure. lol Have a great day gw. Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2022 5:24:00 PM

I am quite the shy guy, or at least I used to be. Thanks for all of your support, Bill. Joy and Light, gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/10/2022 11:09:00 AM

I think she must have blown you a kiss and swept you off your feet Gershon. I enjoyed this fun poem :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2022 5:28:00 PM

Regrettably, most of my kisses these days are Hershey Kisses. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/10/2022 3:48:00 AM

Great imagery! You always make me smile :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2022 5:29:00 PM

For four years now, I can't imagine you not smiling, Kim. I just glance at your avatar, and there's your smile. :) gw

Deb M

Date: 1/10/2022 1:38:00 AM

Love it Gershon…..I believe she vanished!!! Cheers Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2022 5:31:00 PM

I believe that you are right, Deb.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/9/2022 11:33:00 PM

She blew you a kiss and then vanished. Now to the medical bills for your jaw :)

Anselmo Boles

Date: 1/9/2022 11:03:00 PM

You have a better vantage point, so your guess is better than mine. Smiles G.W.!...ab

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/9/2022 10:47:00 PM

This made me smile Gershon. I need to make more time to read poetry. Thank you xxoo