Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

A Heavenly Vision

A heavenly vision
  came walking my way
I tried to stay calm
  but my face gave me away

My eyes nearly bulged
  right out of my head
sweat dripped from my chin
  'neath a gap-toothed grin

My jaw dropped beside me
  as I lowered my head...
Had she blown me a kiss
  ~ or vanished instead

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Caren Krutsinger January 11, 2022 at 1:12 PM Love the ending! Gershon Wolf January 11, 2022 at 2:17 PM And what's the beginning? -- Chopped liver? Ha, ha. Just kidding.

Bill Baker January 10, 2022 at 4:29 PM Aah! shy Gershon. Cute peom, sounds like me in my teens forsure. lol Have a great day gw. Bill Gershon Wolf January 10, 2022 at 5:24 PM I am quite the shy guy, or at least I used to be. Thanks for all of your support, Bill. Joy and Light, gw

Heidi Sands January 10, 2022 at 11:09 AM I think she must have blown you a kiss and swept you off your feet Gershon. I enjoyed this fun poem :) Gershon Wolf January 10, 2022 at 5:28 PM Regrettably, most of my kisses these days are Hershey Kisses. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2022 at 3:48 AM Great imagery! You always make me smile :) Gershon Wolf January 10, 2022 at 5:29 PM For four years now, I can't imagine you not smiling, Kim. I just glance at your avatar, and there's your smile. :) gw

Deb M January 10, 2022 at 1:38 AM Love it Gershon…..I believe she vanished!!! Cheers Debx Gershon Wolf January 10, 2022 at 5:31 PM I believe that you are right, Deb.

P.S. Awtry January 9, 2022 at 11:33 PM She blew you a kiss and then vanished. Now to the medical bills for your jaw :)

Anselmo Boles January 9, 2022 at 11:03 PM You have a better vantage point, so your guess is better than mine. Smiles G.W.!...ab

Connie Marcum Wong January 9, 2022 at 10:47 PM This made me smile Gershon. I need to make more time to read poetry. Thank you xxoo