Janice Canerdy Poet Rhyme

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Date Posted: June 1, 2019 Contest Title: Objectifying a Season   Placed 4th   Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper

March 28, 2020, entered in Line Gauthier's Cheerful Rhyme Contest        placed 3rd

June 24, 2026, entered in Brian Strand's "1483" poetry contest        HM

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A Heavenly Spring Day

My front porch is my throne today
as I rest in my swing.
The birds and squirrels are at play.
My wind chimes softly sing.

Green grass and my grand ancient trees
have moved my pen to write
of them, of drifting clouds that please,
and butterflies in flight.

Spring’s fragrant blooms engage my muse,
along with bees and birds.
Last lines appear, all due to views
that summoned forth the words.

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Sara Kendrick July 1, 2026 at 2:21 PM Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K.

Paula Goldsmith March 4, 2022 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Wish I was on your front porch watching the birds/butterflies. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Bj Legros Kelley March 2, 2022 at 2:04 PM Congratulations Janice on the high placing win of your beautiful poem! <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)

Eve Roper April 8, 2020 at 12:20 AM Congratulations on your win, Janice, with great imagery, rhyme and content. Hugs Eve

Wendy Watson April 7, 2020 at 4:07 AM Oh I was there in the garden with you, Janice! What a delightful start to my day and congratulations on your win. Janice Canerdy April 7, 2020 at 9:02 AM Thank you so much, Wendy! Janice

Sandra Adams April 6, 2020 at 8:05 PM beautiful imagery from porch to pen... congratulations on your win... hugs Janice Canerdy April 6, 2020 at 8:16 PM Thanks a million, Sandra. Janice

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2019 at 9:36 AM Congratulations, and that porch of yours is an AWESOME setting for your creativity. Janice Canerdy June 7, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Line Gauthier June 5, 2019 at 1:18 PM Congrats on your win, Janice. Well done. Janice Canerdy June 5, 2019 at 5:03 PM Thanks so much, Line. Janice

Smita Kulkarni June 4, 2019 at 2:15 PM Beautiful description of spring morning! Congrats on your win! Janice Canerdy June 4, 2019 at 6:17 PM Thanks so much, Smita. Janice

Line Gauthier June 2, 2019 at 10:12 PM Ideal morning, Janice. Congrats on your win. Janice Canerdy June 3, 2019 at 7:55 AM Thanks so much, Line. Janice

Sheri Fresonke Harper June 2, 2019 at 8:41 PM Congratulations Janice on your fourth place win in my contest, you followed all the rules and I experienced Spring from the swing on your porch, enjoyed it. Janice Canerdy June 2, 2019 at 8:49 PM Sheri, THANK YOU so much for placing my poem! Janice

Ralph Sergi June 2, 2019 at 12:15 PM I love the way that Spring inspired you to write such beautiful poem, Janice feels like a winner! Ralph Sergi June 2, 2019 at 12:16 PM SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM

Silent One June 2, 2019 at 7:14 AM Sounds lovely Janice.. Janice Canerdy June 2, 2019 at 7:31 AM Thanks so much, S.O.! Janice

Line Gauthier June 1, 2019 at 10:23 PM Sounds like a perfect day indeed, Janice. Janice Canerdy June 2, 2019 at 7:32 AM Thanks so much, Line! Janice

Vijay Pandit June 1, 2019 at 4:02 PM Pleasant and flowery like the lively spring--so well written, Janice. Janice Canerdy June 1, 2019 at 8:11 PM Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice