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Date Posted: June 1, 2019 Contest Title: Objectifying a Season   Placed 4th   Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper

March 28, 2020, entered in Line Gauthier's Cheerful Rhyme Contest        placed 3rd

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A Heavenly Spring Day

My front porch is my throne today
as I rest in my swing.
The birds and squirrels are at play.
My wind chimes softly sing.

Green grass and my grand ancient trees
have moved my pen to write
of them, of drifting clouds that please,
and butterflies in flight.

Spring’s fragrant blooms engage my muse,
along with bees and birds.
Last lines appear, all due to views
that summoned forth the words.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/4/2022 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Wish I was on your front porch watching the birds/butterflies. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
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Date: 3/2/2022 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations Janice on the high placing win of your beautiful poem! <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
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Date: 4/8/2020 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice, with great imagery, rhyme and content. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/7/2020 4:07:00 AM
Oh I was there in the garden with you, Janice! What a delightful start to my day and congratulations on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Wendy! Janice
Date: 4/6/2020 8:05:00 PM
beautiful imagery from porch to pen... congratulations on your win... hugs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/6/2020 8:16:00 PM
Thanks a million, Sandra. Janice
Date: 6/7/2019 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations, and that porch of yours is an AWESOME setting for your creativity.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/7/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 6/5/2019 1:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janice. Well done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2019 5:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line. Janice
Date: 6/4/2019 2:15:00 PM
Beautiful description of spring morning! Congrats on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/4/2019 6:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Smita. Janice
Date: 6/2/2019 10:12:00 PM
Ideal morning, Janice. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/3/2019 7:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line. Janice
Date: 6/2/2019 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations Janice on your fourth place win in my contest, you followed all the rules and I experienced Spring from the swing on your porch, enjoyed it.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2019 8:49:00 PM
Sheri, THANK YOU so much for placing my poem! Janice
Date: 6/2/2019 12:15:00 PM
I love the way that Spring inspired you to write such beautiful poem, Janice feels like a winner!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/2/2019 12:16:00 PM
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM
Date: 6/2/2019 7:14:00 AM
Sounds lovely Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, S.O.! Janice
Date: 6/1/2019 10:23:00 PM
Sounds like a perfect day indeed, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 6/1/2019 4:02:00 PM
Pleasant and flowery like the lively spring--so well written, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2019 8:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
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