Supraja Kannan Poet Rhyme

A Heavenly Conversation

After a quite long time
Leaning on dad's shoulder warm
Like a newly speaking child
Babbling trivial stories wildly

Showing my poetry on soup's first book
Sharing the biscuit ice-cream I cooked 
Asking him to review the paintings I've drawn
And complaining badly about the relatives gone

Ravished by his sudden arrival
I saw a gleam of hope in survival
When I was lucidly expounding the episodes 
All he did was Laughing out loud

" Hey, kutti, Do you think I've been faraway?
Don't you know I can't go anywhere away?
I am still here watching all the happenings
Now, come, just relax and speak to me"

Uttered he, subtly in my dream 
The warmth, the caress, the secured feel
Made me feel the plot so real and surreal 
Oh! How I wish the dream not to end!

Feb 10 2022

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Valsa George March 9, 2022 at 9:29 PM Till the end, I thought you were narrating a real incident ! Only at the end I realized it is just a whimsical dream ! It is such a lovely write so soulful and touching, Supraja !

Unseeking Seeker March 6, 2022 at 2:07 AM Beautiful, lucid dreams … so real and life like with fond memories of moments spent together, enjoyed the read, Supraja

Victor Buhagiar February 10, 2022 at 7:30 AM Such dreams do not always end. I often dream of my wife even though five years have passed. Blessings.

Sotto Poet February 10, 2022 at 7:04 AM Supraja, you've written a well-composed poem. We find great comfort in communicating our true sentiments with those we care about. Thanks for your visit and comment on my page.

Vijay Pandit February 10, 2022 at 5:56 AM Enjoyed the dream you shared. Much comfort we find sharing heartfelt feelings with the ones we loved--dreams too feel so real because we never let go of the love shared.