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A Heavenly Choir

Counted more than a dozen birds on a wire Methinks it's a rehearsal for their heavenly choir Birds of a feather Flocking together They're a-coming, to springtime they aspire

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/21/2018 2:11:00 PM

So do I! Come on Spring. Yes, a limerick promising Spring and delivering a smile! I had joy here just now ... CayCay

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/21/2018 2:28:00 PM

What a sweet comment dear CayCay!!! Keep on a-smiling, it's good for ya!!! Happy day wishes with love, Happy Jack xoxox

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/19/2018 11:39:00 AM

Good job it wasn't a live wire or they would have been fried Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2018 11:45:00 AM

Hmmm fried birdies on a wire! Could be another (more tragic) lim!!! Happy Jck

Silent One

Date: 2/19/2018 8:15:00 AM

Rainy days and Mondays make me blue, I smile, but deep down i know its true. Till I read Jack's limerick, these could heal the sick! In his funny church, lets take a pew!

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2018 8:59:00 AM

WOW you and Kim are challenging my shaky crown!!! This one was exceptional!!! YEE HAW!!! Maybe we can all just share the crown!

Silent One

Date: 2/19/2018 8:13:00 AM

Good one Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2018 8:56:00 AM

Aw it's just around the corner... came see it off in the distance!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/19/2018 7:45:00 AM

YESSS! It's right around the corner, visiting you first, I'm a little jealous ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2018 7:51:00 AM

Fantastic week ahead dear Mo!!! ZOWIE!!!! Good morning dar Mo!!! Lotsa love, Happy Jack xoxox