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The weight of me has left and I rise, eyeless, voiceless,
the world a colorful but fading sight, an orb confining
As bits of we, and he, and she, we rise in glory painless
to lose the ego side and be, one with God defining.

By Daniel B. Holeman The weight of me has left and I rise, eyeless, voiceless, the world a colorful but fading sight, an orb confining As bits of we, and he, and she, we rise in glory painless to lose the ego side and be, one with God defining.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2012 7:18:00 AM

awesome way to do the topic, Debs, big congrats to you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2012 5:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 7:27:00 PM

congrats Debbie on a dynamic win for this lovely write on the great beyond luv.. appreciate all the e mails and blogs too ..

Cheryl Aldea

Date: 3/26/2012 6:31:00 PM

Congratulation on your win... Cheryl

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/26/2012 5:52:00 PM

Debbie...never did I stop to think that egos wouldn't be in heaven...a wonderful tho't process behind your poem...it is filled with a magnificent spiritual light! Congrats, Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2012 5:51:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/26/2012 4:30:00 PM

Beautifully written, and with a great picture. Congratulations on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/26/2012 3:07:00 PM

Wow Deb.....very beautiful and so deserving of recognition. Congratulations on your big win with this gem.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/26/2012 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your big no. 2 with this beautiful concept. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/26/2012 1:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Deb. Beautiful. Nice going. Huggs, Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2012 12:26:00 PM

This is truly a beautiful poem, Deb. Congratulations on your second-place win. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2012 1:52:00 PM

this is very nice Debi..how you defined the Heaven here.Best wishes.

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/24/2012 7:13:00 AM

This is a superb creation by you. Love this. Write on please.

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/24/2012 7:05:00 AM

I love Daniel Holemans art Debbie and what justice your words have done it..lovely xxx Hugs

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/24/2012 7:35:00 AM

I often am so confused by human desire..what more could one ask for in heaven than to be reabsorbed into the body of God..to be one with God? How could we think any earthly love could compare? or would remain once in the presence of God..ALL will be there in his body as we are here in his earthly body..but not as their separate ego human self..[my opinion here of course ;)]

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/23/2012 8:00:00 PM

Great writing Debbie. Love, Joyce