A Heartbeat Only She Can Hear

Dancing in the shadows, fallen angel of the night, accepted by the darkness when abandoned by the light.
Embraced by its desire, darkest delight pulling her near, in the arms of blind divinity, a heartbeat only she can hear.
Fire in her veins, she breathes life unto the dead, shrouded in the passion of being shamefully misled,
Fallen angel of the night, her psalm upon the midnight air, animated effervescence captured in a vacant stare. 
Dancing in the shadows, fallen angel of the night, accepted by the darkness when abandoned by the light,
Embraced by its desire, yet upon her a cheek a single tear, still bathing in divinity to a heartbeat only she can hear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/27/2016 9:28:00 PM
Rache, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 6/15/2012 2:16:00 AM
nice and beautiful.thank you for sharing .jk
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:26:00 PM
wonderful writing!!! enjoyed!!
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Date: 6/14/2012 6:45:00 PM
Rache,, enjoyed..pd
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Date: 6/14/2012 1:23:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Rache. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so so much for your comments, they mean the world to me. It is truly an amazing feeling when someone can feel your heart through your words and know where you are coming from. Thank you x
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Date: 6/14/2012 8:30:00 AM
a lovley poem welcome to poetry soup
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Rachael Hewett
Date: 6/14/2012 9:17:00 AM
Thank you ever so much. And thank you...its fantatsic to be able to find a site like this so we can share our gift and support each other
Date: 6/14/2012 5:06:00 AM
Really beautifully written
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Rachael Hewett
Date: 6/14/2012 9:18:00 AM
Thank you. I was always told my rhymns and punctuation is all over the place lol but i write with my emotions and wherever they go, lol so do my words
Date: 6/14/2012 4:10:00 AM
You have given me strenght to carry on. My deepest heart felt blessing. I thank you! Peace be with you my friend.
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Rachael Hewett
Date: 6/14/2012 9:16:00 AM
And with you Steve..thank you...hold the candle in the darkness and stand strong my friend..help is never too far away
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