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The small full stop dots under the last line of poem represent swirl grain dust

0. 0 0 0 0 0. 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0. 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0. 0 0 0 0 . 0 0. beads of sweat enshroud 0 0 a sun-drenched heart’s arid pine 0 0 quelled by swirl grain dust 0 0 . 0 0 • . . •. 0 0. • • • • . 0 0 . . • 0 0 • • • 0 0. • 0 o . • , • • 0 0 0 0 • . . . • . 0 0. ‘ • • • • . o 0 • • 0 0 • • 0 0 • • • 0 0. 0 0. 0 0 0 0 0

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Date: 7/2/2025 6:44:00 PM
interesting write. congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/2/2025 8:39:00 AM
Innovative form design and elegant spinning, Howard. Congratulations on your deserved win.
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Date: 7/2/2025 7:09:00 AM
Nice swirling. Congratulations Howard! :)
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Date: 7/1/2025 9:48:00 PM
Love that heart shape. Congrats in the contest
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Date: 6/28/2025 9:13:00 AM
Creative shape work. Way to go. Sometimes I feel like life issues out some blood, sweat and tears for me then I think about all the good things in my life. Sara K
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Date: 6/26/2025 9:25:00 AM
So beauteous, Howard. A free flowing little literary work of art. Your mind is a gemstone. Have a wonderful late afternoon! :))))
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