A Heart Once Lost

As I lay awake in the twilight, lost in thought.
All my past demons awaken I once fought.
The sorrow takes over me so strong and deep.
My inner soul continues to weep.
Where all my woeful feelings I do keep.
My tears pour like a summer's rain.
This beautiful heart is torn apart by all this pain.
My saddened heart bleeds from my inner soul
What now is just a crumbled mess which once was whole.
As I watch my past life flash before me,
My tear stained eyes slowly close so I don't have to see.
The life I thought was once complete is nothing but a distant memory.
Pieces of my broken heart are left behind.
A shattered woman is what you will find.
I can't be that person anymore.
I need to feel what I once felt before.
It's time to open my heart's closed door.
Love brings with it joy,happiness, and sorrow.
In order for me to live again, I have to love again like there maybe no tomorrow.
My heart cries to be once truly loved.
So I call upon my faith and God above.
Take away from my heart this melancholy place.
Fill it with all the love I can give in it's space.
Give me the courage to fight the demons I must face.
Life is short and if we dwell on mistakes of yesterday.
It's impossible to let love find it's own way.
I ask for the inner courage to give my heart away.
Let all the bad memories remain secluded in the past.
Open this bruised and closed heart to a love that will last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006


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Date: 11/30/2008 7:38:00 AM
Dawn - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:35:00 AM
Dawn -Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:22:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/3/2008 2:01:00 PM
A very beautiful and depthful write. A soul's reflection. Congrads on being featured, Sara:)
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Date: 8/3/2008 10:51:00 AM
Hello Dawn This is written fron the depths of heart and soul. It brings to mind for me also, what I know our troops will be living with when they come home. Your heart,love really comes through here. Congrats on this well deserved feature write this week. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/1/2008 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dawn. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 9:20:00 AM
Well written emotional write. Congratulations Dawn on "A Heart Once Lost" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:41:00 AM
Hope you have found the courage you seek. Such an outstanding a beautiful poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/27/2008 6:07:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem - your inner-strength and faith really shine in this poem - May your new love be truly blessed - congrats on being featured
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Date: 7/27/2008 5:37:00 PM
So much truth shared in this poem. Through faith it is possible to move past the pain. Blessings to you for sharing this honest piece with us. wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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