A Heart Broken Past

You were a hot little Hispanic man. And I was your infatuated fan. Your love for me was cheeky, Dreams ended very bleakly. Now, I’m happy ever after, God’s plan. © January 28, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: A valentine Limerick~ to your x-lover the heart- breaker ( explaining how life goes on ) after the heart break. Sponsored by: Sidney ~ LeeAnn

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Russell Sivey

Date: 1/27/2012 11:52:00 AM

A very creative write Dane Anne! I'm happy that things worked out for you in the end! That's the way it was supposed to go, "...happy ever after..." was what you ultimately wanted! Awesome Work!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/27/2012 3:44:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Russell. Yes, I finally found exactly what I needed...happiness with my soul mate.

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/27/2012 8:36:00 AM

Cheeky !!! How dare he !!! lol....enjoyed your limerick !!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/27/2012 3:43:00 PM

He dared! And I was stuck on him for years...finally, I met my soul mate! Thank God.