Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Limerick

A Heart Broken Past

You were a hot little Hispanic man.
And I was your infatuated fan.
Your love for me was cheeky,
Dreams ended very bleakly.
Now, I’m happy ever after, God’s plan.

© January 28, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: A valentine Limerick~ to your x-lover the heart-
breaker ( explaining how life goes on ) after the heart break. 	
Sponsored by: Sidney ~ LeeAnn

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Russell Sivey January 27, 2012 at 11:52 AM A very creative write Dane Anne! I'm happy that things worked out for you in the end! That's the way it was supposed to go, "...happy ever after..." was what you ultimately wanted! Awesome Work!! Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 27, 2012 at 3:44 PM Thank you for reading and commenting, Russell. Yes, I finally found exactly what I needed...happiness with my soul mate.

Debra Squyres January 27, 2012 at 8:36 AM Cheeky !!! How dare he !!! lol....enjoyed your limerick !! Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 27, 2012 at 3:43 PM He dared! And I was stuck on him for years...finally, I met my soul mate! Thank God.