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A Heart Ajar

A heart ajar a dream half seen in a chest whose lid was quickly fastened. A heart ajar a smile half delineated upon a flake of snow which in no time melts. A heart ajar a long beautiful sentence whose verb never dared to come out in the light. A heart ajar a poem half read before you reach its climax and touch its heaven. A heart ajar a love drawing near like a ray of sun you try to catch but will always flee. Love and it may open, though.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/24/2014 6:38:00 PM
a beautiful, genuine verse here....the waves of emotions hit me when I read this well-written poem. Keep writing with your might and shine bright. -DWB 7/7
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 9/26/2014 8:18:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, David!
Date: 7/26/2012 12:41:00 PM
My hearts ajar with love for this poem. Well done! :) Tanya
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/30/2012 7:07:00 AM
Thank you very much. I try to keep my heart ajar too!
Date: 7/9/2012 2:07:00 AM
Thanks!
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:06:00 AM
Thanks!
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Date: 7/6/2012 2:04:00 PM
Dreams are fleeting, eh? But reality is such a bore. loved each stanza of this jewel. daver
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/9/2012 2:05:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/6/2012 2:58:00 AM
This is nice. I love the different scenes you've portrayed to build up to the conclusion.
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/9/2012 2:08:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/6/2012 2:23:00 AM
Sweet write .Its true that when heart opens up completely,it is bound to feel the pleasure and the pain:)but try we must.
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/9/2012 2:09:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/6/2012 2:18:00 AM
You humble me ...yes with my blessing and peace to you. You may read more of mine at http://theptp.wordpress.com/
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/9/2012 2:09:00 AM
Thank you, Steven. I'll post it!

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