Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

A Health Nut

Daddy was a health nut, ran five miles a day
Was proud as hell, more proud than I can say
Eat sensibly like him
But not nearly as trim
Working on it but at 20 years older, more decayed

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Silent One November 21, 2017 at 10:06 AM Aww.... it is never too late my friend.. Jack Ellison November 21, 2017 at 1:31 PM Working on it... that may be redundant but I've lost 50 lbs this year! (of course I was 560 lbs. when I started) Joking of course!!!

James Horn November 20, 2017 at 9:23 PM Price by the old has to be paid; Body is destroyed and decayed; Became gray, Day by day So she now is an elderly maid. As usual exceeded my ten again. I will just make poem part of my comment to you. Jack Ellison November 21, 2017 at 7:34 AM Well done Sir James!!! Join our exclusive club! Cheers, Jack

Lim'Rik Flats November 20, 2017 at 8:58 AM Some parts can't be restrained//nor will they be retrained//at this stage//a later age//especially hard to be rebrained. RUN ON SLIM JACKOBEWAN!!! Jack Ellison November 21, 2017 at 7:31 AM My wishes are for a happy outcome, good buddy! Think positive!!!!!!!!!!! xx Lim'Rik Flats November 20, 2017 at 10:21 AM So far so good. Going to see Doc today about some "irregularities " Jack Ellison November 20, 2017 at 9:47 AM My dada was way ahead of his time, but cancer has no pity! So far, I've been free of any kind of bad stuff! How's abut you, my friend?