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A Hawk Etheree

eyes
super
sharp search prey 
my spirit guide
awakens memories
and cosmic messages
synchronicities abound
beware, be bold, perceive, protect
visionary powers, base chakra
hawk medicine teaches observation

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Akkina Downing

August 7, 2017 at 11:28 AM

You made it look so easy to write etheree. I have yet to write one. I'm inspired by yours :)

Phil Capitano

August 7, 2017 at 11:37 AM

Thanks Akkina this was my first but I just posted my second called "Crematorium". Hope you like it.

Silent One

July 20, 2017 at 6:17 AM

Etheree is one of my fave forms, you have written this very well..

Phil Capitano

July 20, 2017 at 6:42 AM

Thanks S.O., glad to have you back. Still working with the form. Take care.

Scott Thirtyseven

July 19, 2017 at 8:17 AM

Nice poem. Best of luck in the contest, sounds an interesting topic.

Phil Capitano

July 20, 2017 at 6:43 AM

Thanks for visiting Scott, I appreciate it. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

July 5, 2017 at 5:02 PM

Excellent Etheree poem, Phil. Cool meditations. Superb imagery. Love always.

Anisha Dutta

July 2, 2017 at 1:58 AM

GOOD ONE I love Etheree form. Last two lines are really impressive

Phil Capitano

July 2, 2017 at 6:36 AM

Thanks Anisha that's so kind of you to say. Namaste.

Connie Marcum Wong

June 30, 2017 at 4:46 PM

I love the Etheree form. She would be so thrilled to know so many celebrate her form today. Like the haiku, this short form takes some time to master. This is a brilliant example Phil! Your inclusion of the base chakra defines the animal instinct that we humans still need to control. I love this poem Phil! Bravo! : )

Phil Capitano

July 1, 2017 at 6:51 AM

Thanks Connie that's so nice of you to say and do; I'm never sure how they are going to read. Have a great day. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

June 30, 2017 at 4:47 PM

I forgot to mention I Faved it! : )

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 29, 2017 at 8:20 AM

Mystical writing exploring the depths of the soul! Excellent dear Phil! Good luck my friend!

Heidi Sands

June 23, 2017 at 4:56 PM

That is great Phil. I like how direct you were with the writing. Sharp and clear. Really fitting with the Hawk as a guide. Good luck in the contest :)

Phil Capitano

June 23, 2017 at 8:04 PM

Thanks Heidi for the encouragement; my first etheree so I wasn't sure how it read.

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