A Hard Thought

So many things in this world are out of my control...
So I must be extremely careful with the things that are not.

- just a thought
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 6, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Makes perfect sense to me. Such a wonderful thought to ponder. Nicely expressed Chris
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October 10, 2016 at 6:30 PM
From one Chris to another, thanks for the visit and the kind words:)
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September 20, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Oh yes indeed you are so right
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September 23, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Thanks for reading Harry:)
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August 28, 2016 at 3:36 AM
A Damned good thought as well, Chris - Wise words indeed! My best regards! :) john
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August 28, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Thanks for reading John, glad you agree...best wishes to you as well:)
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August 27, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Your poetry made a lot of sense. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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August 28, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thanks for reading Darlene:)...I know it's not really a poem, just a thought, but I'm glad you found truth in these words:)
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August 27, 2016 at 5:22 PM
If it's any comfort to you, Chris, even I find that many things are out of my control! As you rightly say, we have to be careful and make the right decisions in cases when we are in control. Regards // paul
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August 28, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Somedays it seems like it's all out of control haha!...thanks for reading my thought...I took a cue from your one-liner and thought I'd submit this shorty, hope you have a quiet controlled day:)
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August 27, 2016 at 3:49 PM
It is a very good thought, Chris! It said wisdom out beside and that is what pulled me in. Definitely was not disappointed!
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August 28, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Thanks for reading Daniel...every once in a while the good Lord slaps me upside the head with wise thoughts!:)
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August 27, 2016 at 3:43 PM
So true Chris :-) Do we ever have an "easy" thought and if so.. is it worth it. I do enjoy "thinking" poetry and this is a great one :-) Hope all is well in your pretty corner of the world :-) bundles of blessings, lynn
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August 28, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Thanks for reading Lynn...things are pretty ok here in my corner. Even if they weren't who wants to listen to complaints?! I have food to eat, clothes to wear, a roof over my head and good health, so compared to many others in the world I'm a ok:)
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