A Happy Choka

Adult dreams fulfilled
Children’s faces, frozen smiles
Wishes now reality
Just because of you
Memories last forever 
Disneyland my dream came true 

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
09.16.2014
For Contest: Choka Me
Dr. Ram Mehta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:27 PM
You have to go around Halloween when the characters dress in costumes...It is a tremendous experience...hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:39 PM
I'd probably get scared. :-/. I'd love Christmas though.
Nance Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:16 PM
How fun I would love to go! hugs!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:38 PM
It's so fantastic Casarah. Someday you'll make it.
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Ahh!! Great to go to Disneyland..Great contest..Fun time for all the family..Sara
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:37 PM
Thanks Sara. Nice you stopped by.
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Was out with friends and their grandchildren have just been to Eurodisney - you captured this brilliantly Brenda:-) Hugs Janxx
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Many years ago I won a holiday to Florida - went to Disenyland with my parents - had an incredible time - its for kids of all ages:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 4:43 PM
I was so blessed to go in Florida once, just a few years ago. Three adults two teenagers and we had a ball.
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