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A Happy Birth Day To You

When you were born only you were crying When you were born everyone was lauhging to welcome you in this world..... When you were dying only you were smiling When you were dying everyone was crying to say goodbye to you..... When you were born everyone greeted you from the heart A happy birth day to you.....

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/13/2014 9:00:00 AM

Congrats on the win again,

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/13/2014 7:50:00 AM

Wow, amazing. I never looked at it like this. Congratulations on your win Mohammad.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2014 3:40:00 PM

many congrats on your win Mohammad:-) hugs Jan x

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 4:55:00 AM

Nice write on birth and death, congrats on the win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2014 11:27:00 AM

- Hey Mohammad, congratulations on your 4th place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2014 10:37:00 AM

A very beautiful poem you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Mohammad! I enjoyed thoroughly again the read. Congratulations on your win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 10:22:00 AM

Mohammad, congratulations on a wonderful win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/11/2014 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win for interesting write, Mohammad

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2014 2:16:00 AM

Mohammad, Thank you for everything, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Have yourself a wonderful night, and a beautiful mother's days.... (enjoy my latest blog if you like) xox~ Linda"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2014 11:29:00 PM

A lovely dedication... xox...LINDA