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A Hanging Divinity

~Hanging in there is divine, Feline, representative of wholeness, Feline of fancy, I remind; my Overalls be the proof of boldness, my wall hanging is proof of goal-quest. ~Though proof is faulty at best, duress not easy for one to concur. Be patient as I confess; though overall position hides Monsieur,(my lord) divine, divinity is clear, ‘bonsoir!(good evening) This poem is patterned after 2007 Form Challenges #18 English Quintain This is a popular form of Quintain having no set measure or foot and has a rhyming scheme of a. b. a. b. b.

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Date: 8/2/2011 7:21:00 PM
The French pussy cat, speaks for sure, you do it well, that i am for, luck in the contest mate, Don
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Cute interpertation of the picture.Good luck ...Reads like a winner to me..I might try one of these..Thanks for letting me know that I passed through the first elimination in the international poetry contest..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2011 7:38:00 PM
bonsoir monsieur, i have a message for you. i hope you find it intresting as i am sure that you will. john
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:16:00 PM
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:24:00 PM
interesting take on thecontest John [check the spell on evening] Light & Love
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:52:00 PM
A very deep interpretation of the photo, John. Indeed, duress can seem overwhelming, but "divinity is clear" for those who believe. If "bonsoir" is meant to say good night in French, it's two words: bon (good) and soir (night). A very meaningful entry for Francine's contest! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/31/2011 1:18:00 PM
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