Get Your Premium Membership

A Haiku Triology

If we were like words— Oh we would live forever; But we are human— God gave us the words— That they pour out forever; We are but vessels— Words live forever— Their begetters are like grass: So be we poets—

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/15/2015 1:47:00 PM
I like this, the rhythms that run through the trilogy and the repetition of 'forever' in particular.
Login to Reply
Lowe Avatar
Millard Lowe
Date: 10/15/2015 2:25:00 PM
Gail, Thanks for the read and feedback. Peace and Love. M. Lowe

Book: Reflection on the Important Things