A Haiku

reluctant leaves fall
from the old tree showering
an old man walking.




[haiku contest, sponsor Constance La France, 3/2/22]

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Kim Rodrigues

October 23, 2019 at 7:50 AM

Says much! Love it! Congratulations, L.J.!

L. J. Carber

October 23, 2019 at 8:08 AM

Thanks Kim!

Gershon Wolf

October 22, 2019 at 8:51 PM

Such an interesting image you've penned in this haiku! Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon

Gershon Wolf

October 23, 2019 at 6:12 PM

Nothing like an 'old' friend, eh?! LOL. Smiles, gershon

L. J. Carber

October 23, 2019 at 8:08 AM

Thank you, my old friend!

Andrea Dietrich

October 21, 2019 at 7:47 PM

Congrats again!!! It's charming as ever!

L. J. Carber

October 22, 2019 at 10:05 AM

Thanks, Andrea!

Line Gauthier

October 21, 2019 at 3:21 PM

Beautiful image. Congrats on your top win, LJ.

L. J. Carber

October 22, 2019 at 10:06 AM

Thank you, Line

Janice Canerdy

October 21, 2019 at 11:49 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your win, LJ. Very lovely. Janice

L. J. Carber

October 22, 2019 at 10:06 AM

Thank you, Janice

Brenda Chiri

October 21, 2019 at 9:23 AM

L.J. Beautiful congrats on your win!;)

L. J. Carber

October 22, 2019 at 10:06 AM

Thanks, Brenda

Susan Ashley

September 15, 2019 at 8:24 PM

I love the emotional artistry of your haiku, L. J. Your creative pen brings the imagery to life beautifully. Congratulations on your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

L. J. Carber

September 16, 2019 at 8:28 AM

The warmest regards to you as well, dear friend--and fellow poet of the soul....