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reluctant leaves fall from the old tree showering an old man walking. [haiku contest, sponsor Constance La France, 3/2/22]

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Date: 10/23/2019 7:50:00 AM
Says much! Love it! Congratulations, L.J.!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/23/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 10/22/2019 8:51:00 PM
Such an interesting image you've penned in this haiku! Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 6:12:00 PM
Nothing like an 'old' friend, eh?! LOL. Smiles, gershon
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/23/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, my old friend!
Date: 10/21/2019 7:47:00 PM
Congrats again!!! It's charming as ever!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/22/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 10/21/2019 3:21:00 PM
Beautiful image. Congrats on your top win, LJ.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/22/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Line
Date: 10/21/2019 11:49:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, LJ. Very lovely. Janice
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/22/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Janice
Date: 10/21/2019 9:23:00 AM
L.J. Beautiful congrats on your win!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/22/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda
Date: 9/15/2019 8:24:00 PM
I love the emotional artistry of your haiku, L. J. Your creative pen brings the imagery to life beautifully. Congratulations on your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/16/2019 8:28:00 AM
The warmest regards to you as well, dear friend--and fellow poet of the soul....
Date: 9/10/2019 4:43:00 PM
excellent haiku, L.J. Congrats on the awesome win
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/12/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Andrea!
Date: 9/10/2019 7:08:00 AM
Great image! Congratulations, L.J.!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/10/2019 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, Kim!
Date: 9/10/2019 12:05:00 AM
Love this. Congratulations and blessings
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/10/2019 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Regina, I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 9/9/2019 3:36:00 PM
fabulous imagery, congrats on your win L J:-) hugs Jan xx
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/10/2019 10:46:00 AM
Thanks, Jan
Date: 10/11/2018 5:07:00 PM
Lovely imagery, LJ.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 3:45:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, LJ. Indeed I love haiku and merging with the art of photography.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/11/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you Line-- I'm glad you like haiku too-- it's one of my favorite forms of poetry.
Date: 12/6/2016 9:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Len. Well Done. Hugs. Cap'n Deb
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/7/2016 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, 'Cap'!