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A (Haiku)

One golden ship sails
Awash in peppermint dreams
Powered by the wind

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Amy Swanson

February 8, 2009 at 7:17 AM

I love this!!! So pretty... especially the peppermint dreams. :) Dreamy. Congrats on being featured! :) Blessings, Amy

Michael Jordan

February 5, 2009 at 6:16 PM

Michael - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 3, 2009 at 11:06 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 3, 2009 at 5:18 AM

Congrats Michael on your haiku being featured this week. Vince

Donna Golden

February 1, 2009 at 8:42 PM

I like your choice of colors here. ;-) DG

Iolanda Scripca

February 1, 2009 at 4:58 PM

Can it be interpreted as a bite of a minty chocolate wrapped in golden foil and the sensation of coolness the pepermint gives you? That's my opinion :) Congrats for being featured this week!!! Love, iolanda

Iolanda Scripca

February 1, 2009 at 4:49 PM

Can it be interpreted as a bite of a minty chocolate wraped in golden foil and the sensation of coolness the pepermint gives you? That's my opinion :) Congrats for being featured this week!!! Love, iolanda

February 1, 2009 at 2:52 PM

The wonderful imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen