A Haibun Abstraction

a haibun ABSTRACTION
The soft yellow streaked the terra cotta,shadowing the speckled sallow saffron 
a bluish buff upon the cochineal;brilliant boneblack grizzled the engrain
citrine carnation as the fallow flaxen,rustic rubrical rainbow-tinted 
the magenta mandarine;unseen the ultra-marine, tinged burnt sienna,
reflecting a golden flame of raw umbery upon the earth green;bright mosaic gold
mottled the sallow sorrel virent yellow,oak stained the pale apricot;while
blood red,reddish russetdotted the olive lind;freckled crimson,a chestnut maroon,
on fuchsias faded apple green as burnt rumber sank deep into its sanguine slumber.

I walk through the glade
abstractions enlighten me-
colour my rainbow

you hear me recite this haibun and much of my PS poetry on youtube unfer my pen name ichthyschiro

catch my short form @strandpoet on twitter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/4/2015 10:33:00 PM
a splash of color done in a " stream-of-consciousness" way, brian.. huggs
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:50:00 PM
Thanks Nette you have 'hit the mark' with your shrewd take on endeavours of mine(just as you have so done ,consistently over the years here)on PS.rgds Brian(Soupmail update)
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