A Gypsy Moon

Of Roma blood, gypsy am I, black of skin and eye
fair Dooriya named for the sea which calls to me.
For tribe and violin, I live, to God alone, I cry.

The road is home and children are my destiny, 
as night descends a fires burn, I play and my man sings.
Fair Dooriya named for the sea which calls to me.

We are tinkers, tramps, thieves and wild wanderers who bring
the wheel of life, your karma's get, comes on dancing feet,
as night descends a fires burn, I play and my man sings.

"Kaska san," we say to you "Whose are you?" we greet.
Do you belong "Kas zhanes, Who do you know?" 
the wheel of life, karma's get, comes on dancing feet.
 
No claim hold we to earth or sky although,
we own our own with laws which often bite.
Do you belong "Kas zhanes,Who do you know?"

a crystal ball
gleams by fire light
a wolf howls

If no known answers comes there's oft a fight,  
of Roma blood, gypsy am I, black of skin and eye
and under fair or stormy skies, we will unite
for tribe and violin, I live, to God alone, I cry.


Contest: Let the Music Play On

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/4/2013 6:56:00 AM
'twas a deserving win!!
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Date: 1/21/2013 4:49:00 AM
Really a great fantasy Debbie, congratz on your win, :D
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Date: 1/12/2013 2:30:00 PM
Yours is a stand out...no wonder it won! Reads like a classic, an old culture brought to life...where do these come from??? Congrats!
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Date: 1/12/2013 2:46:00 PM
I don't know Carrie..I think the last Werewolf movie LOL
Date: 1/12/2013 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 8:09:00 AM
This is an amazing Terzanelle, and the Questionku is just perfect. Congratulations!!
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Date: 1/12/2013 7:14:00 AM
congrats on ur win...surely a topper...:))
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Date: 1/12/2013 3:13:00 AM
gosh Debbie definitely worth top spot xx
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Date: 1/12/2013 2:07:00 AM
Debbie congrats on your win, a very worthy first place win, love this outstanding write...David
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Date: 1/12/2013 12:53:00 AM
Beautifully written Debbie! I love the way it draws you in - captivating. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/12/2013 12:48:00 AM
Congrats Debbie for the top win with this classy write!! Jag
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:45:00 PM
D G.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Date: 1/11/2013 8:24:00 PM
congrats on a great win....
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Date: 1/11/2013 7:39:00 PM
Passionate poetry Debbie! A blessing to read! Congratulations on your place! E=mc²
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Date: 1/11/2013 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations, it was a pleasant surprise to see your name when I posted my list. Excellent poem.
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:06:00 PM
Terzanelles are not easy to do. Great entry, Debs. An ambitious one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:40:00 PM
your spirit runs free, debbie.. congrats!.. :) huggs!
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:55:00 PM
Debbie, another great win,, Congratulations in, Lisa's contest. It's been sweet reading many of the winners out here this week.. Take care~ PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on another well deserved win Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 1:47:00 AM
Debbie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/23/2012 4:12:00 PM
You bring even the language, and I can almost hear the accents...in your gift of unique and keen creation...as always, the mark of one who is well read, and well versed. Another wonderful example! Excellent!
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Date: 5/9/2012 6:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Debbie. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:44:00 PM
Hmmm... enjoyed reading this today Debbie if it is for the contest i wish you well..)
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Date: 5/8/2012 3:39:00 PM
We always cry alone. Nicely rhymed poem. i also know your poems by the way they flow.
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