A Guarantee of Love 8x8
Like dew upon a rose you sate,
a love only God can create.
Now time has passed and we do see
our passion’s always been innate.
As we drown in true loyalty,
devotion is our renown fate.
In affection you saturate-
our vows bona fide guarantee.
*syllable counter said "passion's" is 3 syllables, I used it as 2*
8X8 Poetry Contest
P.S. Awtry
November 9, 2018
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