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A Grounding Technique

I can see:
The pretty blue sky,
with bright sun shinning.
Fall garden sleeping,
flowers are all dead.
Big bees a buzzing.
 

I can feel: 
Cool breeze touching,
my warm dry skin.
Warm lovely sun,
covers me up.
 

I can hear:
The birds sing,
barking dogs.
Kids on bikes.
 

I can smell:
Coffee,
donuts.
 

I can taste:
Cream.

flowerfungardenjoykidfree verse

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/16/2024 8:53:00 PM

coffee..cream!! Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/18/2024 7:21:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "A Grounding Technique" write. It was a fun to write. Yes, cream in my coffee with a donut is heavenly. Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/16/2024 12:46:00 PM

"1 Place" A Grounding Technique~Date Written:12/4/2024~Written By Human

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:21:00 AM

- Back with a congrats, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/16/2024 12:45:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over and for your Congratulations. Great to see you back again. Glad you enjoyed my "A Grounding Technique" write. It was a fun contest to write on. Hugs... Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Jay Narain

Date: 12/8/2024 10:07:00 AM

Nice work. Love the last three stanzas.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my "A Grounding Technique" to be Nice work. Glad you love my hear, smell, taste stanzas. Yes, coffee with cream eating a donut hearing the birds sing is my kind of a day. This does Not happen toooooo often. Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Len Gasun

Date: 12/8/2024 9:40:00 AM

You animated all our major senses with your superb write my dear poet friend Paula. You also write well free verses poem which is difficult for me. I enjoyed this gem a lot. Thanks for sharing my dearest friend and your kind visit on my poem. Sorry for late visit coz I was so emotional and sickly lately. One of my relatives closed to my heart again passed away. But I'm fine now. Thanks a lot again. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2024 7:35:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my "A Grounding Technique" to be a gem. I am sorry about the news. Feel Better... Life can be hard from time to time. Hugs... Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Michael Tor

Date: 12/5/2024 2:36:00 PM

This touches our senses and grounds us to the things we see, feel, taste, smell and see. Thanks for sharing Dear Paula..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/8/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my "A Grounding Technique" write. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Hugs... Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2024 7:41:00 AM

- The senses are lovely, Paula... I'm in the thinking box for this contest... good luck with your entry :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2024 8:39:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over and for your good luck with my entry. Glad you enjoyed my "A Grounding Technique" write. It was fun to write. I know you will come up with something great, you always do. Hugs... Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2024 3:28:00 AM

Your senses are alive with this spectacular write, paula...much enjoyed!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2024 7:30:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my "A Grounding Technique" to be a spectacular write. Glad you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/4/2024 8:22:00 PM

You have done a lovely job representing each of the five senses here, Paula. Bravo! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2024 7:27:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my "A Grounding Technique" write to be a lovely job. Enjoy your day as you see, feel, hear, smell and taste your day away...................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/4/2024 11:33:00 AM

A Grounding Technique~Date Written:12/4/2024~Written By Human Poet......