A Greener Grass

You think I have a pretty face My dresses weaved from frills and lace You think that I'm a spoilt brat with diamonds around my neck and roses in my bed You think I own the pot of gold A blissful future to behold You think I live on a greener grass but you know nothing No ,you know nothing about my past There are chapters still on hold A thousand words untold There's emotion still enclosed in a lacrimal drop There is a tasteless tale,a colourless spume and large waves that fall on the shore There's a silent cry which keeps yelling why which keeps loving and hating,mending and breaking Pushing ,embracing our God My unfaithful devotion keeps begging in motion Asking what,where,when,and how long For how long should I wait for to feel the affection, love and protection to listen to daddy singing for me just one birthday song For how long should I pray for,to listen to daddy just calling out my name on the phone You think I have a pretty face My dresses weaved from frills and lace You think that I'm a spoilt brat with diamonds around my neck and roses in my bed You think I own the pot of gold A blissful future to behold You think I live on a greener grass but you know nothing No, you know nothing about my past You know nothing about the way I feel About deep scars that would never heal You just keep thinking that I live I live on a greener grass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/23/2015 7:40:00 PM
So touching and sad, Charmaine. Felt honore d to have a glimpse in your life.
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Date: 3/16/2015 5:34:00 PM
No one really knows the pain we bury deep within
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Date: 3/11/2015 12:35:00 PM
A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being human and sharing the pain intrinsic to our species when it deals with matters of the heart. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:50:00 AM
I came to this poem because where I now live there is no grass, and I thought the likelyhood is you do live on greener grass. But your words have changed cynical mind, and mellowed it, and made it think. I'm ashamed of that former me. The one that hadn't read this poem yet.
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Date: 2/26/2015 3:17:00 PM
Quite frankly, you have touched a part of me with your poem; somewhat sad, yet like a song to be cont...
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:12:00 AM
Hi Charmaine: I lived your poem. A greener grass. lovely metaphor.
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Date: 2/12/2015 4:43:00 PM
Wow, Charmaine.. Not often does a poem move me to tears, but this one did... Beautiful flow... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/9/2015 6:14:00 AM
A very, very deep poem, Charmaine. It reads well..very well!! :-) john.
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Date: 2/7/2015 8:58:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine!
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Date: 2/5/2015 5:16:00 PM
We often misjudge others, not having a clue to their suffering and tears...you pen great wisdom in this poem.
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:32:00 PM
Dropping by to say hello Charmaine, I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 2/4/2015 2:10:00 PM
Power of truth. Bless of Love. Outstanding expression. Favorite.
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Date: 2/3/2015 11:05:00 PM
Excellent.Deep and very touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 2/2/2015 8:59:00 PM
I've never seen you so furious and complicated before Charma...i like it. Your anger in this poem is vibrant...fearless...unapologetic. There are special parts of you that must be earned, and savored...sad colors...dark passion...hidden dreams..."My unfaithful devotion keeps begging in motion..." mesmerizing conflict...this is a story of love...mad...and hopeful...great write Charma...J.A.B.
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Date: 2/2/2015 6:37:00 AM
This touches to the core. Loved the soft cadence which tempered the pain resulting in a dignified protest against all the wrong assumptions thrown her way... Congratulations Charma! Warm smiles from the land of thousand isles...Kim :D
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Date: 2/1/2015 8:27:00 PM
First let me say A7, this just resonated with me, astounding and beautiful and deep! Loved it!
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Date: 1/31/2015 10:00:00 PM
This one found needed air...nicely done, Char!
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:20:00 PM
I see that you were honored with Poet of the day ! I surly know why ! Enjoy the lights dear ! Have a blessed weekend.........much love, james
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Date: 1/31/2015 10:45:00 AM
and you move me again, dear charms as you gently weave lines into a hauntingly divine work... a fav!.. hugggs
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:25:00 AM
Sweet
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:42:00 PM
deep touching beautiful pen charmaine congratulations on poem of the day dear pal excellent piece
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Date: 1/30/2015 5:18:00 PM
Charma, Congratulation on POTD!! A most intriguing write indeed. Very Well-Done and Most Deserved!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 1/30/2015 2:48:00 AM
Congratulations on being honered with POTD Charmaine with this deeply moving poem. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/30/2015 12:07:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, i find such sadness in the words of you have written. I think of the old saying you cannot judge a book by it's cover, more people should take the true meaning of this to heart. Love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:49:00 PM
Got a nice flow to it Charmaine...
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