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A Green Lake

Seasons had passed, winters froze and slept beneath the sun Trees stood victims to nature herself An angry climate had striken the old town that stood created for many decades A lake formed to ice It had been about 24 years since the last sign of life To be continued.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/9/2009 3:17:00 PM
@.@ nice last line, never expectet to find it in a poem xD yet it's kind of cruel sometimes jojoj great imagery @.@ take care yei!!!=D
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Date: 6/29/2009 7:03:00 PM
I can't wait to read part two!!! -Alley
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:04:00 PM
Jeremiah! Your poem creates chilling effect on mind. A vivid description of how freezing winter can destroy habitation. I wait to read the rest of the poem. Meanwhile, thanks for your comments on my poem Do not Knock. God Bless You.-Mohammad
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Date: 6/28/2009 2:47:00 PM
sign of death and cold ice-no warmth at all,like the poet of darkness woke oncemore---great write little brother--charma
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