A Great Little Tip

Here's a little tip for a happier, healthier day
  It depends precisely on the words you say

Ask about waking with "What time?"
  Your answer's a number---at 6 o'clock's chime

If instead, you just ask 'When?"
  You get up naturally, whenever sleep ends

Wonder a bit later, "What time is lunch?"
  You'll likely feel compelled to munch a bunch 

But if you couch 'hungry' in terms of "When"
  You're unlikely to eat a meal for ten

And so it goes throughout the day
  Take your focus off the clock; keep it far away...

I'd write more about this great little tip, but --
  It's 2:00, time to hit the pool for my afternoon dip
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Krutsinger Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Hilarious that the only time you care about is "time to play in the pool" time!
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Well, one has to care about SOMETHING, you know! LOL. And please remember: Pool starts with pee. ~ gw
Ravidas Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 3:22 AM
At 2:00 I laughed out) Nicely done, Wolf. 100 rays of fun.
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Alright! Everyone in the pool --- fun's starting now! :) gw
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 2:38 AM
Great advice Gershon, since I retired I rarely go by the clock, before retiring I lived by it. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Ha, ha. Thanks for the foreshadowing, Tom: Sounds like I'm about ready to hang it up myself, as I rarely go by the clock anymore. Here's to stepping outside of time and living life! Best wishes, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 8:20 PM
Ha! I am guilty of clock-watching and I must admit it and I should spend more time without it. Well penned.
Sands Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:41 PM
Great tip. Maybe enjoy the moment better this way :)
Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Could be!… I'm taking my own advice and trying this, so I/we'll see how 'great' my little tip is. LOL. Thanks for the view and the viewpoint, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon
Gorelick Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Smiling! Now Im hungry....BG
Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:36 PM
When, Barbara? When are you eating? (Not 'What time?') LOL. Thanks for the comment and the support. ~ gw
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