A Great Day For Leopards

A Great Day For Leopards  
   It was a great day for leopards,
  Three poachers killed,
   And one maimed horribly,
   It was a bad day for them !
  But it was great day for leopards,
   They had a party,
  And celebrated in style,
   With three deer & an hyena,
  Well into the night,
  They feasted, merrily,
    I'm glad for the leopards,
  But, for the poachers,
    It's a dangerous game,
   The leopards should remain,
  And have the right to exist,
    But the slaughter still persists,
   But at least they had one great day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/14/2023 4:02:00 PM
There appears to be some confusion surrounding the title, you should opt either for 'Good' or 'Great.' I think you meant to refer to deer in line 8. A powerful piece about justice and the natural food-chain.
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Martyn Bishop
Date: 4/14/2023 4:23:00 PM
N.B. hi John, just to say that i've just managed to edit & update it. Many thanks again, and for your very kind comments too. All the best ~
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Martyn Bishop
Date: 4/14/2023 4:10:00 PM
Yeah , the deer as well ! , wasnt quite awake !, thanks for letting me know anyway
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Martyn Bishop
Date: 4/14/2023 4:09:00 PM
Sorry, yeah, i got it wrong on title bit, i forgot to change it on website, dont think i can change it back to great ?!
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