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A Great Day For Leopards

A Great Day For Leopards It was a great day for leopards, Three poachers killed, And one maimed horribly, It was a bad day for them ! But it was great day for leopards, They had a party, And celebrated in style, With three deer & an hyena, Well into the night, They feasted, merrily, I'm glad for the leopards, But, for the poachers, It's a dangerous game, The leopards should remain, And have the right to exist, But the slaughter still persists, But at least they had one great day.

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Date: 4/14/2023 4:02:00 PM
There appears to be some confusion surrounding the title, you should opt either for 'Good' or 'Great.' I think you meant to refer to deer in line 8. A powerful piece about justice and the natural food-chain.
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Martyn Bishop
Date: 4/14/2023 4:23:00 PM
N.B. hi John, just to say that i've just managed to edit & update it. Many thanks again, and for your very kind comments too. All the best ~
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Martyn Bishop
Date: 4/14/2023 4:10:00 PM
Yeah , the deer as well ! , wasnt quite awake !, thanks for letting me know anyway
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Martyn Bishop
Date: 4/14/2023 4:09:00 PM
Sorry, yeah, i got it wrong on title bit, i forgot to change it on website, dont think i can change it back to great ?!

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