A Grandpa Morning

Mute morning of the Fall
Birds on wires shiver quietly
He doesn't hear much at all

Morning feels like cold of night
dark blue clouds linger overhead
blocking warmest sun from sight

Where is the morning paper?
No light, just dead man's winter
cold morning like an arctic night

Grandma says to put your coat on
you can catch pneumonia even the flu
maybe the sun will come out before long

Come in by the fire and have a sit
the hospital is not a very nice place
but it is there if you ever need it....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 16, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Ken I could feel the emotion pouring out of you onto the page for the reader to immerse in. Words of power and deepness. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Mystery Man poem. Hugs
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December 16, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Thank you Robin.. Ken
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August 9, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Kenneth, such a morning. needing reminder who we are. not much from a grump who knows the words grandmother passes on. one can take this as advice. love the poem...hugs *** from me to you. goodnight >< linda
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August 9, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Buenas Noches.....lo siento....lol
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August 9, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Thank you mi Linda Paloma..Buenos Noche... Besos y abrazos, Ken :-)
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