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A Grammarian

It was a stolen date on a late winter evening Placing rosy dots on her cheek with a hug A secret told to the senses instead to ears Then found the right place for the kisses, Kisses stamped one after the other like tears. The real ones that I could not hold them back. There were brief, swift and before were done The floodgates open like a grammar book. Starting with a comma then a question mark Followed by an exclamation point of learning The basic spelling that all lovers should know. Began the kiss with colon, she got all the options. Shake her strongly till the imageries, metaphors, Similes are forsaken till looks like a new born. ============================== Date 28-10-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Third place win Contest: Fantasy (allegory-symbol) by Giorgio Veneto

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Date: 11/20/2013 7:01:00 AM
Nice win, Congrats
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Date: 11/18/2013 6:45:00 PM
Dr Ram., . ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:38:00 PM
delightful play of thoughts, dr, ram... warm congrats!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:11:00 PM
Grammar and kiss !Excellent job Dr...This is so unique write with , ! . etc
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:49:00 AM
Interesting work for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:51:00 AM
- An interesting poem to read from you Dr.Ram - Well done!- Luck in contest ! - Hope your day will be beautiful. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 6:32:00 AM
Richard a very clever pen TFS ty for visiting my page Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:02:00 AM
wonderful use of poetic techniques with well-rendered , lyrical inages, dr. ram..:) huggs
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:56:00 PM
A romantic poem with grammar language twists, something unique indeed! Enjoyd readin. Kudos Dr.mehta frm my homeland india.
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