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A Grain of Sand

I tossed a pebble
in a placid lake and
caused roaring ripples
in the vast seas;

I blew softly on the
breath of a passing breeze
and spawned raging storms;

I gathered high mountains
in  a warm embrace
and set their hearts ablaze;

I scratched on the face
of the earth and gouged
these deep canyons;

I kissed the setting sun
and sent tremors through
the core of the earth;

I set the remedy 
for all the ills of mankind
within the realm of nature;

I replicated 
the laws of the universe
in a drop of water;

I garnered 
these profound secrets
and locked them in
a grain of sand!


~Maytime Standard contest by Brian Strand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/16/2017 9:38:00 AM
Very profound and powerful, Abdul. I really enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your first place win in the contest. 7 Sandra
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2017 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Sandra. Appreciate your comment very much.
Date: 5/16/2017 8:55:00 AM
A 7 for your well-deserved top win, Abdul! I felt the power of God in this lovely piece! Janice
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Janice. Appreciate your comment very much.
Date: 5/16/2017 7:06:00 AM
I love this. A 7 and fave. Congrats on your win.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Agnes.
Date: 5/15/2017 5:16:00 PM
Very good write it says it all everything is here a complete world , with all the answers within.. :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Glen. Appreciate your comment.

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