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A Grain of Sand

I tossed a pebble in a placid lake and caused roaring ripples in the vast seas; I blew softly on the breath of a passing breeze and spawned raging storms; I gathered high mountains in a warm embrace and set their hearts ablaze; I scratched on the face of the earth and gouged these deep canyons; I kissed the setting sun and sent tremors through the core of the earth; I set the remedy for all the ills of mankind within the realm of nature; I replicated the laws of the universe in a drop of water; I garnered these profound secrets and locked them in a grain of sand! ~Maytime Standard contest by Brian Strand.

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Date: 5/16/2017 9:38:00 AM
Very profound and powerful, Abdul. I really enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your first place win in the contest. 7 Sandra
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2017 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Sandra. Appreciate your comment very much.
Date: 5/16/2017 8:55:00 AM
A 7 for your well-deserved top win, Abdul! I felt the power of God in this lovely piece! Janice
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Janice. Appreciate your comment very much.
Date: 5/16/2017 7:06:00 AM
I love this. A 7 and fave. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Agnes.
Date: 5/15/2017 5:16:00 PM
Very good write it says it all everything is here a complete world , with all the answers within.. :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Glen. Appreciate your comment.

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