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A Gorilla Eats

a gorilla eats a yellow flower - - humming birds flee lol, had to use that gorilla jack horne for sidney’s contest

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/3/2012 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love the gorilla!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/26/2012 4:43:00 PM

Nice and awesome write,Jack...You were able to combine the three objects/subjects in one Haiku...Congratulations on your win...O.A.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2012 2:00:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/25/2012 7:32:00 PM

Made me smile..congrats to you. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2012 11:44:00 AM

JACK ..Congratulations with your wonderful win,,, ... ;-) always~PD

Kash Poet

Date: 4/24/2012 10:05:00 PM

Hahaha....enjoyed very much jack.Congrats!!

Skat A

Date: 4/24/2012 9:42:00 PM

congrats with your wonderful win' Siddy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:20:00 PM

OH, you rascal. YOu used it before I could. hahaha. FUNNY guy.

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/14/2012 5:04:00 PM

Ha Ha Ha, ohhh now that one IS funny! I can't believe you used the gorilla picture for your poem, how hilarious! And he eats the yellow flower to boot! I agree with Sara though, hummingbirds are very strong creatures! They can avoid almost anything with their stunning speed! Anyway, your write is a terrific one, and I love your poem a lot! Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 12:16:00 PM

wow.. run is more like it Jack.. an amazing visual here luv.. good luck in contest .. enjoyed with a smile..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/14/2012 12:01:00 PM

well this made me chuckle, jack :D! Just imagining that gorilla with a dainty flower and hummingbirds fleeing :D -- very cool image actually :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2012 9:18:00 AM

Cute one..I really don't think that gorilla would scare the hummer though for they are tough ..nine feet tall and bullet proof..Sara ...Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you enjoyed some of my work..Sara