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A Goodnight Kiss - Love

two sets of dentures
in glasses beside the bed - -
a goodnight kiss *

* I was going to write a French kiss, lol

For Andrea’s Love contest

lovesenryu

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John Beam

January 25, 2014 at 7:37 PM

Congratulations on your win Jack, I enjoyed thanks for sharing

Carrie Richards

January 25, 2014 at 9:42 AM

You have given me such a smile with this endearing poem !!! Super Congrats, Jack !!

Barbara Gorelick

January 25, 2014 at 8:04 AM

I knew this would be a big winner..congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 25, 2014 at 7:45 AM

- Jack - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 25, 2014 at 6:38 AM

Fabulous jack ! Simply class !! Congrats on a great win !!!

Connie Marcum Wong

January 25, 2014 at 3:11 AM

A delightful senryu Jack. Congratulations on your first place win!

David Williams

January 25, 2014 at 2:34 AM

Jack, a truly excellent write, big congratulations my friend... a worthy winner...David

Juliet Ligon

January 24, 2014 at 9:50 PM

Awww, how sweet. I love it when elderly people are still romantic with each other. Creative visual, Jack. Congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 24, 2014 at 8:00 PM

I enjoyed the humor and congratulations on the fine win, jack

Roger Horsch

January 24, 2014 at 7:52 PM

Congrats Jack, A well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2014 at 7:42 PM

oh boy you got me here. I was thinking a woman wrote it for some reason ,maybe for the LOL!!! You are a riot, Jackn. BIG congrats for top win. Your senryu was PERFECT in every respect.

Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2014 at 9:50 AM

I hope Andrea, likes this one Jack... it is sweet... loving Linda

Russell Sivey

January 12, 2014 at 9:19 PM

You have written another fabulous write he my friend! I surely have enjoyed reading this phenomenal poem here this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!