A Goodbye From All of Us

From that day to the next week, snow, rain and sleet -no sun.
Everything surrounding us is black,
Precious presents become precious past
Blurred cloudy water filling our vision
All together we grip, holding tight to memories taken,
Memories that have become dreams at night and haunt are days.
Were you ever here, my friend?
We whisper what could have been.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Scott Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Welcome to poetry soup Macaiah. Heartfelt emotional piece!!! Nice write.
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August 21, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Thank you so much! :)
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April 25, 2014 at 9:55 AM
This is an emotional write presented before me...I love your play on words. You moved me deeply with this one my friend...Thanks for sharing..and I'm still waiting for more..lol
Gross Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:46 PM
lol, Your too kind. Thanks a lot
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April 22, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Macaiah, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Gross Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 9:50 AM
You guys are awesome here. Thank you. It has been a very welcoming so far. I am just learning my way around the page, but when I figure it out I will add and look around at your work. Thanks again!
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April 18, 2014 at 11:59 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Macaiah :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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April 20, 2014 at 10:26 PM
Thankyou! very kind of you. looking forward t reading your poetry as well. Thanks again for welcoming.
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April 18, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Macaiah, , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Gross Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Thankyou ! I'll give a look at the contest. I am going to check out some of your work also. Thanks again for warm welcome
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