A Good Ticking Off

fed up splitting hairs the flea scratches at its head ~ must stop nit picking By David Kavanagh

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/18/2021 8:30:00 AM

Yes, a lot of nit picking is going on these days. It is noticed. For even, "the flea scratches at its head" Crazy- but true. I like the way you think. The way you express yourself. :) Brandy

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/15/2021 9:30:00 AM

Forensic combing

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 10:45:00 AM

very good I like that

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2021 9:53:00 AM

haha, GREAT job here.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/13/2021 10:58:00 AM

Thanks again Andrea, I appreciate your thoughts as always, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/12/2021 8:06:00 PM

I love it.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/12/2021 11:24:00 PM

Thanks Super mo, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 2/12/2021 7:03:00 AM

The best response would be...HA HA HA.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/12/2021 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Jenna even thinking of them gets me scratching , cheers David