A Good Ticking Off

fed up splitting hairs
       the flea scratches at its head 
          ~ must stop nit picking 

By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Nicole Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Yes, a lot of nit picking is going on these days. It is noticed. For even, "the flea scratches at its head" Crazy- but true. I like the way you think. The way you express yourself. :) Brandy
Flaherty Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Forensic combing
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 10:45 AM
very good I like that
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 9:53 AM
haha, GREAT job here.
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Thanks again Andrea, I appreciate your thoughts as always, cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 8:06 PM
I love it.
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 11:24 PM
Thanks Super mo, cheers David
Logan Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:03 AM
The best response would be...HA HA HA.
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Thanks Jenna even thinking of them gets me scratching , cheers David
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