A Good Poem

Sometimes
A good poem
Will bend 
My brain
In a new
Direction
Of thoughts
And pathways
Neurons revived
I still stand
For those without a voice
For those so hurting
It hurts me
My heart is to big
To be up your sleeve
But this I know with certainty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Palli Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 2:03 AM
Love this one, especially the idea of how it works on the brain. Nice job!
Parker Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:20 PM
thanks :)
Parker Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:20 PM
thanks :)
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