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A Good Change

I once told myself that your thoughts is what tells you lies. following my dreams. im done washing my eyes. growing up i felt so ugly with low self-esteem. im beautiful because i made my dream. walking by people back than that you see dont even notice you. it's because you changed with the pretty in you. yes i was stuck with lots of wonders of how would i ever show me. i have man telling me now i see real and thats the woman we want to see. i smile now because not only outside now theres so much beauty. inside theres i gift. a gift to let people listen to not only my words but dreams. a good change is what i mean.

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Date: 3/29/2009 4:36:00 PM
You have alot of type-os that distract from your poem. The basic idea is good, always a good thing to check with the spell check and re-read when you post. I "people back then? I love the thought about "the pretty in you" That is a wonderful line. Thanks for sharring. Judy Riley
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