A Good Appearance With a Bad Intention

My adored is here, Oh Vincent! Charming with your perfume's scent not minding if it costs just 50 cent. Wishing to lean on you and form a crescent on your well endowed body which is like an expensive present. Stealing a kiss from me is decent but pulling me back and forcefully keeping my legs bent; even with my resistance, you would not relent makes you a pathetic Dog 100 percent. And I am regretful of my time badly spent. I escaped, when you were a little complacent as you rudely smiled like a badly trained Adolescent. And all these while, I thought you were innocent. How dare you try to penetrate without passing through my consent? Now that the beast in you, you represent, the only thing I have to say to you is REPENT!
Published: 6/6/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Roy Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 12:24 AM
Good poetic expression, Funom. Liked it. God bless you.
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 6:36 AM
Thank you so much Pratap Roy
Schneiter Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:30 PM
This poem is deeply affecting because it causes one to think of the same kind of violence that is happening circa tens of thousands of times even as I write this. You have stated, with eloquence, a tragic universal truth. Bravo, Funom!
Makama Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thank you so much Paul Schneiter
Acquah Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 9:43 AM
well said
Makama Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Thanks a lot Vicki
Jamoner Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Nicely done. This piece is a great work! ^^
Makama Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Thanks a lot Doris
Carpenter Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Love it.. I wouldn't change a thing!
Makama Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Thanks a lot Jim
Palmer Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Your heartfelt poem touched me. I do not know if it is from a personal experience or not, but I read it as such. Those in a position of power be it money, politics, or in this case a person who is admired, should not abuse that power but wield it carefully. You brought out many images of this man who turned from being admired to one who was considered a beast. Many times a woman is considered a person who invites such atrocities when in fact it is the beast in the man that ventures forth. Great.
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:09 AM
You are so right Margaret... So right! Thank you so much for your beautiful words.
Bocsa Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 3:54 AM
Innocence is a magic word to whom world is longing. I like this type of verses including a direct and an allusive inner ethics. It may be read as an ars poetica, too. Rationality and irationality as pulses of human life. The problem is not to control them, but to construe the Acceptable as a term of life itself. Best regards and wishes
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Your words blow my mind away.. What an honor and privilege to have them on my page. Thanks a lot Ovidu Bocsa
Zungu Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:13 AM
Wow, what a piece of art this is. well penned. i enjoyed reading it!
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much Bongani Zungu.
Duncan Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 5:23 PM
Awesome, simply awesome wording :)
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Thanks a lot Debbie... Its really been a while
Belle Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 3:50 PM
I love the way how the poem lead the reader to an interpretation of what is happening This is good,Funom! LoveLots, Ara
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Thank you alot Arabelle for liking the poem. I really appreciate it.
Oneill Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 3:36 PM
Excellent write! I love the title, and the poem even more. At times 'badly trained adolescent' is as much as men amount to. Well done!
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Thanks a lot Conor ONeil. Its been a while
Sefunmi Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:42 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem.
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Thanks a lot Modupe
Yates Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:00 PM
I like the way your poem came together with a conclusion. Thanks for sharing.
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Thanks for reading and the wonderful complement Rowdy Yates
Spase Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:46 PM
Wonderful write on the sensitive not needing a boytoy and how inconciderate today men are.lovely view
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Thanks a lot Jennifer... Anyway, not all men are like that, but this is a reflection of this particular unfortunate situation
Felix Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:46 PM
This fantastic poem funom I really love reading it, thumbs up.
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Thanks a lot buggie Felix
Hicks Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 12:12 PM
Very thought provoking... the images were all too vivid in mind (if not slightly uncomfortable to imagine)... your title is also very good. Some people look well and good on the outside, but a beast can hide behind the mask. I'm beginning to really like your poems... and thanks so much for taking a look at some of mine today :)
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 5:32 PM
oh dear! Thanks a lot Timothy Hicks
Guzzi Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Very mysterious..Light & Love
Makama Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 10:44 AM
thanks Debbies Guzzi
Goudreau Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 6:38 PM
A very moving read. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. A poignant and powerful read. Thank you for sharing!
Makama Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 5:28 AM
wow! Thanks a lot Suzanne C. Goudreau
Ball Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 8:07 AM
First of all sorry I haven't answered your commnets on my poetry but I have just recovered from an illness thanks to God and I will reply better fromnow on, you are excellent in your writtings and may the Lord bless you in your life, God bless bob
Makama Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Thanks a lot Bob
Palmer Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 7:36 AM
great write,great journey,great decision,love it Funom
Makama Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Thanks a lot Richard
Lefanue Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 2:26 AM
Glad you enjoyed my"Forgiven" poem. I enjoyed your poem. Hope you survived OK. Cheers, Maureen
Makama Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 6:38 AM
thanks for your comment.
Ishmael Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:46 AM
powerful words my friend ,like it very much great write
Makama Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Kasim
Ball Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 7:10 AM
thank you for your insight on my poetry and thank you for viewing them, now this is one of your best I think, congradulations on a fine piece of poetry, Keep the juices and intent going you are headed in the right direction, because of poetslike you poetry soup can an has made a differnce in people lives God bless bob
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Wow! This is a lovely comment...
Austin Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 10:32 AM
You are better off without Vincent. Good thing he showed his true rakish ways before the affair went any further. Good write. Love, daver
Makama Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:38 PM
yeah.. You are totally right daver// Thanks
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 9:42 AM
WOW! Love it!
Makama Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 12:01 PM
thanks!
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