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A Good Appearance With A Bad Intention

My adored is here, Oh Vincent! Charming with your perfume's scent not minding if it costs just 50 cent. Wishing to lean on you and form a crescent on your well endowed body which is like an expensive present. Stealing a kiss from me is decent but pulling me back and forcefully keeping my legs bent; even with my resistance, you would not relent makes you a pathetic Dog 100 percent. And I am regretful of my time badly spent. I escaped, when you were a little complacent as you rudely smiled like a badly trained Adolescent. And all these while, I thought you were innocent. How dare you try to penetrate without passing through my consent? Now that the beast in you, you represent, the only thing I have to say to you is REPENT!
Published: 6/6/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/11/2020 12:24:00 AM
Good poetic expression, Funom. Liked it. God bless you.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/15/2020 6:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Pratap Roy
Date: 3/18/2016 6:30:00 PM
This poem is deeply affecting because it causes one to think of the same kind of violence that is happening circa tens of thousands of times even as I write this. You have stated, with eloquence, a tragic universal truth. Bravo, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/30/2014 9:43:00 AM
well said
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/4/2014 8:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot Vicki
Date: 7/30/2014 9:35:00 AM
Nicely done. This piece is a great work! ^^
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/4/2014 8:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot Doris
Date: 7/29/2014 2:45:00 PM
Love it.. I wouldn't change a thing!
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/4/2014 8:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot Jim
Date: 7/28/2014 1:48:00 PM
Your heartfelt poem touched me. I do not know if it is from a personal experience or not, but I read it as such. Those in a position of power be it money, politics, or in this case a person who is admired, should not abuse that power but wield it carefully. You brought out many images of this man who turned from being admired to one who was considered a beast. Many times a woman is considered a person who invites such atrocities when in fact it is the beast in the man that ventures forth. Great.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:09:00 AM
You are so right Margaret... So right! Thank you so much for your beautiful words.
Date: 7/28/2014 3:54:00 AM
Innocence is a magic word to whom world is longing. I like this type of verses including a direct and an allusive inner ethics. It may be read as an ars poetica, too. Rationality and irationality as pulses of human life. The problem is not to control them, but to construe the Acceptable as a term of life itself. Best regards and wishes
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:07:00 AM
Your words blow my mind away.. What an honor and privilege to have them on my page. Thanks a lot Ovidu Bocsa
Date: 7/28/2014 1:13:00 AM
Wow, what a piece of art this is. well penned. i enjoyed reading it!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Bongani Zungu.
Date: 7/27/2014 5:23:00 PM
Awesome, simply awesome wording :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:05:00 AM
Thanks a lot Debbie... Its really been a while
Date: 7/27/2014 3:50:00 PM
I love the way how the poem lead the reader to an interpretation of what is happening This is good,Funom! LoveLots, Ara
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Date: 7/29/2014 8:05:00 AM
Thank you alot Arabelle for liking the poem. I really appreciate it.
Date: 7/27/2014 3:36:00 PM
Excellent write! I love the title, and the poem even more. At times 'badly trained adolescent' is as much as men amount to. Well done!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:04:00 AM
Thanks a lot Conor ONeil. Its been a while
Date: 7/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thanks a lot Modupe
Date: 7/27/2014 2:00:00 PM
I like the way your poem came together with a conclusion. Thanks for sharing.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thanks for reading and the wonderful complement Rowdy Yates
Date: 7/27/2014 1:46:00 PM
This fantastic poem funom I really love reading it, thumbs up.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:02:00 AM
Thanks a lot buggie Felix
Date: 7/27/2014 1:46:00 PM
Wonderful write on the sensitive not needing a boytoy and how inconciderate today men are.lovely view
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/29/2014 8:02:00 AM
Thanks a lot Jennifer... Anyway, not all men are like that, but this is a reflection of this particular unfortunate situation
Date: 3/23/2013 12:12:00 PM
Very thought provoking... the images were all too vivid in mind (if not slightly uncomfortable to imagine)... your title is also very good. Some people look well and good on the outside, but a beast can hide behind the mask. I'm beginning to really like your poems... and thanks so much for taking a look at some of mine today :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 5:32:00 PM
oh dear! Thanks a lot Timothy Hicks
Date: 11/4/2012 7:56:00 PM
There is a lot of room for interpretation in this poem! I love it, great rhyme too! Nice write :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/6/2012 9:12:00 AM
thanks a lot Anne Currin
Date: 10/13/2012 8:56:00 PM
Very mysterious..Light & Love
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/15/2012 10:44:00 AM
thanks Debbies Guzzi
Date: 9/20/2012 6:38:00 PM
A very moving read. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this. A poignant and powerful read. Thank you for sharing!
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/21/2012 5:28:00 AM
wow! Thanks a lot Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 7/23/2012 8:07:00 AM
First of all sorry I haven't answered your commnets on my poetry but I have just recovered from an illness thanks to God and I will reply better fromnow on, you are excellent in your writtings and may the Lord bless you in your life, God bless bob
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/23/2012 2:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot Bob
Date: 6/27/2012 7:36:00 AM
great write,great journey,great decision,love it Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/28/2012 6:05:00 AM
Thanks a lot Richard
Date: 6/27/2012 2:26:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed my"Forgiven" poem. I enjoyed your poem. Hope you survived OK. Cheers, Maureen
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/27/2012 6:38:00 AM
thanks for your comment.
Date: 6/23/2012 11:46:00 AM
powerful words my friend ,like it very much great write
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/24/2012 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Kasim
Date: 6/15/2012 7:10:00 AM
thank you for your insight on my poetry and thank you for viewing them, now this is one of your best I think, congradulations on a fine piece of poetry, Keep the juices and intent going you are headed in the right direction, because of poetslike you poetry soup can an has made a differnce in people lives God bless bob
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/15/2012 3:14:00 PM
Wow! This is a lovely comment...
Date: 6/14/2012 10:32:00 AM
You are better off without Vincent. Good thing he showed his true rakish ways before the affair went any further. Good write. Love, daver
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/14/2012 5:38:00 PM
yeah.. You are totally right daver// Thanks
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