A Golden Morning

Wearing translucent blankets of golden sun rays
The trees looked bright and sparkly 
Enjoying the warmth of the shimmers 
The leaves started their photosynthesis factory
Showing its noticeable sophisticated pattern 
A cobweb was shining in the morning glimmer
A gust of cool breeze in the air
Made a climb of a hill a little easier
Songs of various birds tweeting on the trees
Played background music of various pitched melodies
Tree branches’ eye-catching artistic twists and turns
Showed deep green foliage densely grown
Vibrant striking clusters of Crepe Myrtles 
Had gorgeous blooms of magenta, white and purple flowers
Views of blueness of the lake waters
Brought eyes a feeling of cooling wonder
A snug little town settled near the lake banks
Was displaying beauty of pretty homes and their yards
Sprinklers running on the green lawns
Had shiny rainbows in their water drops
A golden morning ornate with many angles of Mother Nature’s exquisiteness
Brought the pair back home with content minds filled with happiness

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Date: 7/18/2019 1:11:00 PM
Your poetry is lovely.Good flow of imagery,visual landscapes in their best.Maybe divisible in some genuine stanzas could improve also, your talent.Congratulations.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/18/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for your comments! I write what I see in nature, try my best to word my experiences through my poetry. -Smita
Date: 7/18/2019 7:41:00 AM
Beautiful write Smita..
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/18/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thank you! -Smita
Date: 7/16/2019 9:40:00 PM
Nice images of Nature in this poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/17/2019 3:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Matthew!
Date: 7/16/2019 7:39:00 PM
Your imagery is captivating! Beautiful poem, Smita.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/17/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Franci for appreciating the poem!
Date: 7/15/2019 2:24:00 PM
The image in this beautifully written poem makes it exquisite. Wow! Bravo!
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/15/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Caren!
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