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A Golden Morning

Wearing translucent blankets of golden sun rays The trees looked bright and sparkly Enjoying the warmth of the shimmers The leaves started their photosynthesis factory Showing its noticeable sophisticated pattern A cobweb was shining in the morning glimmer A gust of cool breeze in the air Made a climb of a hill a little easier Songs of various birds tweeting on the trees Played background music of various pitched melodies Tree branches’ eye-catching artistic twists and turns Showed deep green foliage densely grown Vibrant striking clusters of Crepe Myrtles Had gorgeous blooms of magenta, white and purple flowers Views of blueness of the lake waters Brought eyes a feeling of cooling wonder A snug little town settled near the lake banks Was displaying beauty of pretty homes and their yards Sprinklers running on the green lawns Had shiny rainbows in their water drops A golden morning ornate with many angles of Mother Nature’s exquisiteness Brought the pair back home with content minds filled with happiness

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Date: 7/18/2019 1:11:00 PM
Your poetry is lovely.Good flow of imagery,visual landscapes in their best.Maybe divisible in some genuine stanzas could improve also, your talent.Congratulations.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/18/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for your comments! I write what I see in nature, try my best to word my experiences through my poetry. -Smita
Date: 7/18/2019 7:41:00 AM
Beautiful write Smita..
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/18/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thank you! -Smita
Date: 7/16/2019 9:40:00 PM
Nice images of Nature in this poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/17/2019 3:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Matthew!
Date: 7/16/2019 7:39:00 PM
Your imagery is captivating! Beautiful poem, Smita.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/17/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Franci for appreciating the poem!
Date: 7/15/2019 2:24:00 PM
The image in this beautifully written poem makes it exquisite. Wow! Bravo!
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/15/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Caren!

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