A Goddess

through the ether she appeared A Goddess attended by herons the softest light pours from her eyes flamed by the embers of her heart loving without knowing caring without seeing a voice for those without freedom, the answering cry from the dark, nobody else hears cresting Great Rivers, Buck-eyed Demigods genuflect at her feet she is worshiped this Brilliant Goddess and today is her Birthday For ~A

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Amy Sullivan

Date: 10/29/2010 7:11:00 AM

Vivid and stunning imagery Jayne! loved reading your fantastic work today!*

Vicki Acquah

Date: 10/4/2010 1:29:00 PM

This one is ...awesome...I am feeling her esp. how shes so nonjudgmental and loving. wow !

David Smalling

Date: 10/1/2010 7:56:00 AM

Another alter ego for the legendary Leda? May she read this poem and enjoy her birthday, it is a tribute that makes us feel the heart from which it came. One love

Carol Fillmore

Date: 10/1/2010 7:11:00 AM

this is wonderful, I see this Goddess vividly through your imagery. Chose this poem randomly from all those you wrote, and am glad I did! Thank you Jayne for your lovely comment on "Coaxing a write", much appreciated. Coaxing a write is what I was attempting to do with that etheree...anything to get jumpstarted again:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2010 1:01:00 PM

Jayne, a wonderful poem, i feel the peace, in her hearts quietness, and her vibrant power that gives her mortality with the essence to be any bodies goddess. Enjoyed the birth-day dedication. Have a nice one,..p.d.