Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

A God Among Men

Oh, his eyes- as blue as oceans;
Like icy skies, vast and frozen
With just a gaze, my Heart fell molten-
His skin was pale, though mostly golden

His body was bawdy, and perfect oddly
Like the Statue of David- a carbon copy!
His arms were charmed, to me belonged-
A desired physique, firm yet rocky

Were his abs, strong and rippled,
My love for him more than tripled!
As a specimen- a God among men-
Lo! His embrace, leaves me crippled...

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Robin Davis October 24, 2013 at 1:33 PM Chan You bad boy. writing such steamy words. LOL Nice write about your special someone. Glad my Moon Madness poem made you chuckle. But I am not a nympho. I am too sweet to be one. LOL Hugs Just That Archaic Poet October 24, 2013 at 1:39 PM lol I loved your poem "Moon Madness" :) Thanks for the review, sweet pea! <3

Joseph Matose October 16, 2013 at 7:59 AM Archaic!!! You're a great Poet. Your writ flows so smooth and the message flowery.....Check out for my poem: Pop corn Music, in which you feature... Friend JM Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 8:12 AM I always look forward to your reviews, Joseph; many thanks! I will check out your poem here in just a few :)

Joseph Matose October 16, 2013 at 7:58 AM Archaic!!! You're a great Poet. Your writ flows so smooth and the message flowery.....Friend JM

Dr.Ram Mehta October 14, 2013 at 10:47 PM sweeping thoughts nicely penned, AP Just That Archaic Poet October 15, 2013 at 5:44 AM Thanks, Doc! :)

Patrick Farley Iv October 14, 2013 at 1:50 PM Awesome write! Great description of this 'somebody' haha-Patrick Farley IV Just That Archaic Poet October 15, 2013 at 5:45 AM Thanks, Patrick; I appreciate the review! :)

Eileen Manassian October 14, 2013 at 12:30 PM WOW! Quite explicit in its description of desire and admiration...Great write Just That Archaic Poet October 14, 2013 at 12:55 PM Many thanks, Eileen; thank you for the review :)

Jake Ponce October 14, 2013 at 11:52 AM If there is such thing as a spoken serenade, then this may be how one will sound. Swept me off my feet there! It's full of sweet and honest admiration. Just That Archaic Poet October 14, 2013 at 12:55 PM Thanks, Jake. It's a tribute to our threesome partner that comes about once a week to see my partner and I :)