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A God Among Men

Oh, his eyes- as blue as oceans;
Like icy skies, vast and frozen
With just a gaze, my Heart fell molten-
His skin was pale, though mostly golden

His body was bawdy, and perfect oddly
Like the Statue of David- a carbon copy!
His arms were charmed, to me belonged-
A desired physique, firm yet rocky

Were his abs, strong and rippled,
My love for him more than tripled!
As a specimen- a God among men-
Lo! His embrace, leaves me crippled...

Copyright © Just That Archaic Poet | Year Posted 2013

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Robin Davis Date: 10/24/2013 1:33:00 PM Chan You bad boy. writing such steamy words. LOL Nice write about your special someone. Glad my Moon Madness poem made you chuckle. But I am not a nympho. I am too sweet to be one. LOL Hugs Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/24/2013 1:39:00 PM lol I loved your poem "Moon Madness" :) Thanks for the review, sweet pea! <3

Joseph Matose Date: 10/16/2013 7:59:00 AM Archaic!!! You're a great Poet. Your writ flows so smooth and the message flowery.....Check out for my poem: Pop corn Music, in which you feature... Friend JM Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/16/2013 8:12:00 AM I always look forward to your reviews, Joseph; many thanks! I will check out your poem here in just a few :)

Joseph Matose Date: 10/16/2013 7:58:00 AM Archaic!!! You're a great Poet. Your writ flows so smooth and the message flowery.....Friend JM Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/14/2013 10:47:00 PM sweeping thoughts nicely penned, AP Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/15/2013 5:44:00 AM Thanks, Doc! :)

Patrick Farley Iv Date: 10/14/2013 1:50:00 PM Awesome write! Great description of this 'somebody' haha-Patrick Farley IV Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/15/2013 5:45:00 AM Thanks, Patrick; I appreciate the review! :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/14/2013 12:30:00 PM WOW! Quite explicit in its description of desire and admiration...Great write Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/14/2013 12:55:00 PM Many thanks, Eileen; thank you for the review :)

Jake Ponce Date: 10/14/2013 11:52:00 AM If there is such thing as a spoken serenade, then this may be how one will sound. Swept me off my feet there! It's full of sweet and honest admiration. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/14/2013 12:55:00 PM Thanks, Jake. It's a tribute to our threesome partner that comes about once a week to see my partner and I :)