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A Gnawing Temptation

my trembling fingers reaching outwardly through the umbrage of shadows longing to feel your touch my heart quickens beneath forbidden thoughts as i thrust myself forward in the pulse of my dreams the quaver of my lips part in silence to the kiss of temptation appetence unfulfilled November 27,2019 Pick A Title, Vol 11 - Kimo(3 Stanzas) - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Chris Green

Date: 12/9/2019 8:35:00 AM

Congrats my friend for your top win in this contest. I knew I would see this one in the winners area.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2019 8:28:00 AM

Back with congrats, Sandy--you shine my friend in first place.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2019 8:56:00 PM

Congratulations, Sandra! Well done!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/9/2019 4:59:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Na Na

Date: 12/8/2019 7:32:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/9/2019 4:58:00 AM

Thank you :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/8/2019 6:55:00 PM

Congratulations for your great win Sandra :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/9/2019 4:58:00 AM

Thank you :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/28/2019 10:15:00 AM

Wonderful write, Dear lady. Enjoyed it and wish you a win. God bless you and Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/28/2019 6:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Gina, happy thanksgiving :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/27/2019 3:23:00 PM

I see that I have to work on my appetence this holiday. LOL. Thanks for the new word---oh, and a lovely poem, by the way. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Peace and Joy, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/28/2019 6:24:00 PM

lol...i hope you had plenty of food to fill that growing appetence of yours... Happy Thanksgiving... hugs

Na Na

Date: 11/27/2019 9:15:00 AM

Hi Sandra this must of been a hard one. You figured it out and was able to make sense which I wouldnt be able to do. So congrats to you my friend. Best of luck to you in this contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Paul...it was hard to do, with the limitations of the form but i was not giving up on the challenge, i was determined to figure it out... :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/27/2019 7:56:00 AM

Your gift of free verse, Sandy, transcends into Kimo flawlessly--excellent write my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 7:59:00 AM

Wow thank you so much my friend I was doubting my ability ... hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/27/2019 7:02:00 AM

Well writeen and good luck in the contest PR

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 7:13:00 AM

Thank you, this was my first attempt at a kimo...never heard of the form before the contest, i struggled a bit with the limitations of the form... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/27/2019 7:00:00 AM

I can feel the desire in your words deeply in this beautifully written poem my friend. The longing and the aching for that one special thing that will fill the heart with joy. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 7:15:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend, i appreciate your feedback and kind words...it was a hard form for me, i had to keep rewording my thoughts to make it fit and still make sense... hugs