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A Glowing Hallway

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I fly across a lively splendid hallway over to the cross side. Stirringly, my body is as yet stored on the acrid, cold ground. My weights are lowered, relieving a large burden off my gear. Alike a shouting newborn, entirely bare and defenseless. Written: August 15, 2021

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/16/2021 11:35:00 AM

A glorious depiction of crossing over, Lasaad. The picture complements the poem beautifully. Blessings, Evelyn :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 12:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Evelyn, for your delightful comment. Blessings my, friend.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/16/2021 11:12:00 AM

Well done Lasaad, I enjoyed this write..Good luck in the contest...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 12:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Delice, for your delightful comment. Blessings, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2021 7:43:00 AM

Fantastic! A lighter soul still on the cold cruel earth but God holds his newborn.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 12:27:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim, for your insightful comment. Blessings my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/16/2021 3:56:00 AM

You chose a geT FOUR LINER AND HOPE YOU'LL GET A HIGH RATING.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 12:27:00 PM

Thank you very much, Victor, for your delightful comment. Blessings my friend.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/16/2021 2:06:00 AM

Hello Lasaad you paint quite a vivid picture of the great crossover into the unknown, I think we have to approach this subjective topic as a new born baby entering the world, nice writing cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 6:08:00 AM

Thank you very much, David. Your gracious visit and superb comment shed enchantment on my poem, and it's so much appreciated. Blessings and best regards

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/15/2021 4:39:00 PM

Lasaad, your imagery resonates with the film 'Ghost', seen with my boys, and I trust my daughters who were born after would not have held the popcorn as steady as their brothers that day ... Great penning, anyways, here's hoping you the best my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/15/2021 4:56:00 PM

Thank you very much, William. I'm overjoyed to get professional criticism, and your writing has motivated me to do good. You are a fantastic poet. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my little four-liner: blessings and warm regards.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/15/2021 2:13:00 PM

Death is just a gateway to a new life. Best of luck in the Lasaad. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/15/2021 2:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment, Tom; it is, indeed, a doorway to a new life that no one should pass up. Have a great evening, my friend.