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A Glowing Hallway

I fly across a lively splendid hallway over to the cross side. 
Stirringly, my body is as yet stored on the acrid, cold ground. 
My weights are lowered, relieving a large burden off my gear.
Alike a shouting newborn,  entirely bare and defenseless.


Written: August 15, 2021

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Evelyn Judy Buehler August 16, 2021 at 11:35 AM A glorious depiction of crossing over, Lasaad. The picture complements the poem beautifully. Blessings, Evelyn :) Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 12:29 PM Thank you very much, Evelyn, for your delightful comment. Blessings my, friend.

Delice Arleen Skelly August 16, 2021 at 11:12 AM Well done Lasaad, I enjoyed this write..Good luck in the contest...Delice Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 12:28 PM Thank you very much, Delice, for your delightful comment. Blessings, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2021 at 7:43 AM Fantastic! A lighter soul still on the cold cruel earth but God holds his newborn. Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 12:27 PM Thank you very much, Kim, for your insightful comment. Blessings my friend.

Victor Buhagiar August 16, 2021 at 3:56 AM You chose a geT FOUR LINER AND HOPE YOU'LL GET A HIGH RATING. Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 12:27 PM Thank you very much, Victor, for your delightful comment. Blessings my friend.

David Kavanagh August 16, 2021 at 2:06 AM Hello Lasaad you paint quite a vivid picture of the great crossover into the unknown, I think we have to approach this subjective topic as a new born baby entering the world, nice writing cheers David Sotto Poet August 16, 2021 at 6:08 AM Thank you very much, David. Your gracious visit and superb comment shed enchantment on my poem, and it's so much appreciated. Blessings and best regards

William Kelii Kekaula August 15, 2021 at 4:39 PM Lasaad, your imagery resonates with the film 'Ghost', seen with my boys, and I trust my daughters who were born after would not have held the popcorn as steady as their brothers that day ... Great penning, anyways, here's hoping you the best my friend, Aloha! Sotto Poet August 15, 2021 at 4:56 PM Thank you very much, William. I'm overjoyed to get professional criticism, and your writing has motivated me to do good. You are a fantastic poet. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my little four-liner: blessings and warm regards.

Tom Cunningham August 15, 2021 at 2:13 PM Death is just a gateway to a new life. Best of luck in the Lasaad. Tom Sotto Poet August 15, 2021 at 2:47 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment,  Tom; it is, indeed, a doorway to a new life that no one should pass up. Have a great evening, my friend.