A glossy black spiral

Early September in our apartment corridor 
Echoes from the snake moving along the path
Splashes of light from the tide in your eyes 
A painter creating a glossy black spiral 

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                8 September 2024
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September 8, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Scary yet artistic!!
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September 9, 2025 at 12:33 AM
Thank you. Brushes of the artist / Turns the glossy black spiral / Into a bunch of Catkin / Looking for the two cheeks.
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