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A Glimpse In the Garden

My garden lies between the trees
 Where lilies dance in gentle breeze
      And lilacs whisper pretty please
 To  a butterfly's caressing tease

         Nearby glows the buttercup
   Where  honey bees come to sup
        While  hummingbirds on branches squint
  To catch a glimpse of hyacinths
      And daffodils in yellow coats
 Sway to songbirds dulcet notes

 Queen Anne's lace is also grown
 With Forget-me-nots and anemones
     But the rose in beauty stands alone
 And smiles demurely from her throne
                             ----
 Joseph May

         © 5/2/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Light Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Thank yoh for sharing this amazing poem of yours, its very enchanting and dreamy.
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 11:16 AM
can't seem to find a poem of yours to comment on which I have not already seen but here I am again at your BEST poem, according to Soup. Delicious imagery! Do you look at it as your best?
May Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Andrea, yes, I think this is one of my best
Duncan Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 2:15 AM
Awesome write :)
Gist Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Very visual foray of rhymes.
Hagy Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Your write is as lovely as your picture! The rose may be queen, but I have always been partial to wildflowers. None the less, this is a beautiful ode to all of them :) have great day Joseph :)
Roberts Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Such a sweet smorgasbord!
Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Beautifully described!!
Tracy Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Lovely canvas of words that paint such a beautiful landscape!
Cranney Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Great poem Joseph I've read several of your poems now and I do like the style in which you write. Good work. Damian
Goff Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 8:37 PM
Amazing poem, Joseph! one of the truly great poems I have read in quite some time!
Krauter Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Lovely poem. Thanks for letting us have a glimpse of the lovely garden.
Binner Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Wow! That's poetry! I really admire your talent and look forward to reading other poems you have written.
Nipas Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Beautiful! Immediately had me thinking about The Daffodils by William Wordsworth. I really enjoyed it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Delightfully beautiful poem. Colourful and fragrant!
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Hi Joseph, a lovely garden of Eden a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing :)
Kimathi Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 5:48 AM
One can picture the garden and the beauty in the mind so well!!! Congrats Joseph, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:36 AM
I absolutely love this lyrical lovely piece Joseph. I am putting it into my faves. Big congrats on your high placement. It is tops for me. #7 ; )
Palli Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:00 AM
So beautiful! Pituresque indeed! well done, Congrats.
Lane Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 11:04 PM
This is a very lovely garden, Joseph. I'm glad it got another chance to be read. Congrats.
Scars Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Joseph, congrats on your placement in the fave contest :)-luloo
Dalei Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 10:36 PM
a wonderful write. Starting is very impressive. Truly excellent...................with love.
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win and placement in Skat's 'Flower' Old Poems contest. Sandra
Lindley Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:23 AM
A great poem , golden verses and shining ending verse. Congrats on your win!!
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December 25, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your flower win. Love Linda
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December 25, 2015 at 8:18 PM
JOSEPH, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting the Skat Flower Contest theme. :) Stop by and enjoy the flowers on Skat's Latest blog. "Sounds Like A Yes :)" You might pick a flower or two. MERRY CHRISTMAS
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