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Sunlight over receding sea, small waves born. Thawing frozen clouds drenched with rain. Leaves sparkled where motley was worn. Breeze through golden twilight again. Delivered a calming blow to the restless, Fluting never ceases and is zestless. Nature's grace often leaves me speechless, We are in awe of her rich color scheme. Birds pondering in their nests by the stream, Sliding down a frail stalk-like shadow dream. Serenading with pleasure rather than scorn, With such exquisite food, no one feels pain. The crashing waves soothe me, I walk breathless. Calmed in my heart, I muse on nature's gleam. Written: February 04, 2023 Fragmented Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 2/8/2023 3:16:00 PM
An admirable penning, Lasaad, mesmerizing words emanate and flickering thoughts overwhelm, all my best to you, Aloha William
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Date: 2/5/2023 4:42:00 PM
Wonderfully written for the contest Natures effects on us is worded superbly by you my friend. A unique theme that always impresses. An excellent entry for the contest. Lasaad...
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Date: 2/5/2023 9:36:00 AM
An exquisitely lovely poem, with very enjoyable scenes. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 2/5/2023 8:13:00 AM
Wonderful write Sotto, best wishes in the Contest
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Date: 2/5/2023 7:56:00 AM
Nature indeed leaves us breathless. We cannot but marvel over Nature's beauty and gleam. Any form of poetry is viable to you. So beautifully written fulfilling all stipulations ! All the Best in the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 2/5/2023 5:52:00 AM
Splendid images throughout my friend. Keep scripting thoughts of your poetic prowess, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/4/2023 11:20:00 PM
I love soothing poems. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/4/2023 8:58:00 PM
I love nature poems. They bring this sense of joy and calmness to the mind. Absolutely beautiful poem! I love it! :)
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:43:00 PM
Easy yet firm flow of lines and rhymes. Also a super statement about your high regard for Nature. A contender to be sure! Much respect, sally
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