A Girls Night Out

A Girls Night Out

Girls talk.  It’s what they do
And shoes….Yes…They do that too
Some girls are thirsty after breakfast
Coffee’s good but never lasting
They have this thing that they invented
Involving other beverages of certain measure
Adult drinks at night clubs brings them pleasure
Perhaps some alcohol makes things brighter
It might be safe…but then again….
They’re heads are lighter
It’s A Girls Night Out 
An innocent party
To talk about, control and brand a man
Cheering with a brandy in each hand 
When girls gather after hours 
Congregate and “play” to gain more power
They hit the night clubs in high fashion
Looking for a little action
Mary had one too many drinks
And a man’s underwear in her purse
Discovered when she went home
What could be worse?
She forgot his name….and for the record…hers too
Girls talk.  That’s what they do
She ended up marrying underwear man
And still goes out on a girls night out
For fun and pleasure
And shoes…Yes….They’ll use them too
On your head if you refuse

                                                            5/18/14 A Girls Night Out contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/9/2014 10:17:00 AM
LOL, THANK YOU FOR THE REPLY... YOU MADE ME CHUCKLE... LINDA
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:36:00 AM
EARL, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 6/9/2014 10:03:00 AM
Good morning Linda, Thank you so much. I don't understand women so this was a particularly challenging undertaking for me. I appreciate your interest. It was fun to write. Take care, Earl
Date: 6/4/2014 12:52:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, earl
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 6/4/2014 9:35:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, This is not really my style. It was an interesting contest challenge. Thank you for commenting. Earl
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