A Girls' Advice

A strange sight
A damaging night
Sometimes it’s hard to tell
How everything fell

Why do we have to wait for so long
When waiting makes the pain prolong
What do I do to stop the war?
Can I just wish upon a star

Noise everywhere 
People run here and there
Why can’t they see
What the war has brought me

Why can’t they listen to my advice
It seems all they could here is despise
Maybe I’ll just wish upon a wishing well
Before this nightmare turns to hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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